Enola Gay - Edit: Remastered with changed lyrics.

[Ferryman_1957]

Very imaginative piece, and I love that little bass link, great sound on that. There's much more presence to the song than your earlier work, it really rocks now with that "bigger" guitar sound. Drums sound great as well. Well done indeed!

Cheers,

Nigel

[FuzzFace]

Would you care to share the lyrics? I would like to try something with your song, but can´t understand a couple of words in it (sorry, i´m portuguese). Your work caught my attention and I would like to add something in it, if its ok with you. Just an experiment.

Here are the updated lyrics:

Put me in jail / lock me away
Deny my right / to see light of day
Chain me up / I'll reap what I sow
I can't pay the debt / to the world that I owe

Put me in jail / lock me away
Deny my right / to see light of day
Chain me up / I'll reap what I sow
I live with a pain / that I can't even know

Put me in jail / lock me away
Deny my right / to see light of day
Chain me up / I'll reap what I sow
Still feels like today / though it was so long ago

[Geir]

Great song FF !!

Love all the different parts and the way they fit together

[FuzzFace]

Great song FF !!

Love all the different parts and the way they fit together

Thanks.  I think I lowered the drums too much this time.  It's lost the "DOOM METAL" quality to it.

[cuthbert]

Trevor, I like how this turned out!

I think I lowered the drums too much this time.  It's lost the "DOOM METAL" quality to it.

Sounded okay to me, but I was listening through my laptop built-in speakers. Remix? 

[FuzzFace]

Trevor, I like how this turned out!
Remix? 

Thanks. 
I changed some of the words because the first cut sounded like a broken record to me.
And the new lyrics round-out and reinforce the central idea.

I widened the panning on the guitars and lowered the drums to make the distortion crisper.  However I miss the pounding drums now.

I don't typically finnick like this, but this is my pet song and I'm not ready to send it to school.

[pjd1]

loved the guitar chord progression you have laid down , the bass just kicks and then it explodes into rock , great song Fuzzface great vox.

Dunny

[OsCKilO]

This is now officially Awesome....

[Satchwood]

CooL song Fuzz, i dig the guitar intro, and the cool bass line ~!!  I like the lyrics too! 

Maybe you can add some rockin-out lead guitar at the end?

[FuzzFace]

Maybe you can add some rockin-out lead guitar at the end?

If any of you virtuosos want to give it a whirl, I'd be honoured.

It should sound like the sound of hundreds of thousands of people's blood calling out from the ground.