Enola Gay - Edit: Remastered with changed lyrics.

[FuzzFace]

This is about the Atomic Bomb.

No one ever asks how the airplane feels.

This is the airplane's song.


* * * * Edit on May 6 2010 * * * * * *

Thanks to some comments from you I was able to improve the lyrics and make this song closer to what I want it to be.

I consider this my magnum opus.

(Every other song I've made was practice for this one).

Enjoy.

And once again, thank-you for the feedback and encouragement.
This forum and your friendship has enabled me to accomplish things I have always wanted to do.


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Here are the updated lyrics:

Put me in jail / lock me away
Deny my right / to see light of day
Chain me up / I'll reap what I sow
I can't pay the debt / to the world that I owe

Put me in jail / lock me away
Deny my right / to see light of day
Chain me up / I'll reap what I sow
I live with a pain / that I can't even know

Put me in jail / lock me away
Deny my right / to see light of day
Chain me up / I'll reap what I sow
Still feels like today / though it was so long ago

[FuzzFace]

Thanks to Ferryman, Tony W and side effect for the idea to "double-up" the guitar.  Makes a world of difference!

https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=7169.0



And thanks to 64Guitar's explanation that helped me break the "Bouncing Barrier".  

Nothing will be the same again.

[Black Mary]

Put a Blue Monday beat to this & it will be ffckin monstrous.Woah U'v tapped in2 something my friend.

[xicpanad]

Would you care to share the lyrics? I would like to try something with your song, but can´t understand a couple of words in it (sorry, i´m portuguese). Your work caught my attention and I would like to add something in it, if its ok with you. Just an experiment.
Cheers

[launched]

Very cool! Love how it rocks out in the second half.

Sweeet!


Mark

[Tony W]

Talk about a duck on water, That guitar work sounds so much better already! The difference in quality is stunning. The acoustic work was fantastic, and of course the 2nd half is straight up rockin.

[FuzzFace]

Would you care to share the lyrics? I would like to try something with your song, but can´t understand a couple of words in it (sorry, i´m portuguese). Your work caught my attention and I would like to add something in it, if its ok with you. Just an experiment.
Cheers

I don't mind at all, in fact I'm flattered.
Here are the lyrics:

Put me in jail
lock me away
deny my right
to see light of day

Chain me up
I'll reap what I sow
I can't pay the debt
to the world that I owe

[cuthbert]

I really dig this, FuzzFace. Great suspenseful buildup, and then BANG, a solid wall of sound.

cheers,
cuth

[Jim1970]

NICE!!!  A well Produced Piece!!
I love how the Songs Kicks in and then out. Then in again.
JIM

[Jim1970]

COOL BASS piece Then BANG!!!  you Explode into the Song!!

WOW that was cool!!!

JIM