Let's ALL collaborate! (NOW FINISHED!!)

[Hook]

 Here is my proposal: let's each add lines, one at a time,say 10 words max (sign your line in parenthesis) . Try and wait at least 4 lines before adding another and we will see what we come up with. Once we have a lyric we can each write music for it and we'll see what kind of different interpretations we can get. Everybody can title their own interpretation but let's try and keep the lyric intact. It should easily qualify as a collabfest for anyone who finishes and posts a track. I'll start it off and act as a umpire should questions arrive. I bet we might be able to write a few mass collabs if it proves fun!


My inner eye needs glasses (Hook)

[kenny mac]

As my life's path is not clear(kenny mac)

[thetworegs]

The fog of anxiety creeps whenever you are near

[andy casson]

I pause to reflect at the end of the day

[Mach]

To find solace as desolation passes (Mach)

[Hook]

Through this eye I've always seen truth

[Hook]

I love this, as umpire I'm gonna call that a stanza.


My inner eye needs glasses (Hook)
As my life's path is not clear (Kenny Mac)
The fog of anxiety creeps whenever you are near(thetworegs)
I pause to reflect at the end of the day (Andy Casson)
To find solace as desolation passes (Mach)


Through this eye I've always seen truth (Hook)

[cuthbert]

And in my youth, sometimes beauty (cuthbert)

[Oldrottenhead]

shaddy bo

[Burtog]

This robbery of time is a chapter in etiquette (Burtog)