A Deeper Love by Oldrottenhead

[Oldrottenhead]

Todd Rundgren said "love is the answer", I think he was correct. On that theme.

It is what it is.

With a force stronger than intention
Your presence bends the air
Pulling everything into focus
Takes us closer to the edge
This isn't just lust, not entirely
This is something more
A deeper love
A deeper love

Can't remember if I ran toward you
Or if you pulled me in
We fell into each other
Like we never had a choice

It's gravity
That holds us to the earth
Was it gravity
That brought us together
And Gave us
A deeper love etc

[Oldrottenhead]

A little comp and stereo delay would do nicely on your VOX here 

Why?

[Oldrottenhead]

You sang this one well...
But; And just my opinion,
I think you need to set your VOX in the same room (atmosphere) as your trax.

Where do you think i sang it?

[Oldrottenhead]

Lol... never mind 

thank you.

[Oldrottenhead]

Is it just me or is this guy in the wrong time zone?

[Ted]

Hmmmmm... I hope I'm still funny when I'm an old fart 

Still?

[cuthbert]

Todd Rundgren said "love is the answer", I think he was correct. On that theme.

I think John Lennon also said that once. They're not wrong.

I love the lyrics, and they ring true in my experience. There's something out of our control about it, and that makes it all the better. Your arrangement drives it all home.

Hmmmmm... I hope I'm still funny when I'm an old fart 

Still?

Touché!

[Ted]

Hmmmmm... I hope I'm still funny when I'm an old fart 

Still?

Touché!

And the snowflake melts.

Now that that's out of the way...

ORH: This is quite a catchy one. Listening for the 4th time, this time with headphones. I couldn't hear the bass. The bass is very simple, but very effective, and a little gritty.

The vocals have a heartfelt, first-take quality. But there's also a subtle vocal thing in the chorus – almost a call-and-response effect. So you knew what you were doing.

[kenny mac]

This has an excellent vibe to it.
Reminds me of the cure.
Sounds great on the speakers in the car.
I particularly like the vocal sound.
Love it.

[Farrell Jackson]

A very nice love song ORH. I like the your vocals/lyrics and the reverb/delay that you have on the chorus sections...specifically on the "A Deeper Love" lines. Well done!