Collaboration Anyone?

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I was messing around with something in my head while warming up for a different collab   - I have to do the other one first.

Here's a bass riff and a couple lyric ideas if anybody wants to help me realize it over the next couple weeks. The tuning for guitar is D G C F C# F# - It's 105BPM, and I have some notes and a measure breakdown:

Blot Out The Moon

105BPM

They say
Don't talk to strangers
But I feel I've known you
All of my life

The ultimate faker
No intentions of doing
What you intend to do


Chorus

Maybe the things that I do
They put you in doubt

But the feeling might be different
If want it to

And it's hard to hold on
Because you're flippin' me out

Like a dark stormy night
You blot out the moon



Measures

1-2 Count In

3  Intro

15  V1

19  V2

23 Chorus

31 Break

35 V3

39 V4

43 Chorus

51 Break

55 Solo

63 V5

67 V6

71 Chorus

79 Chorus Repeat

87 Outro


A click track with scraps:

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Here's the bass line only:

[Hilary]

How interesting to see a song in progress from the off. I think there's the makings of a great song here and I loved hearing your voice, au naturel! Not for me as I can't write to other people's music but would love to hear it posted in stages as it gets developed.

[Gnasty]

Hey me likes! Should I? 

[Gnasty]

P.S.. I got nothing in the mail..LOL  

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Hey me likes! Should I? 

Yes, bro, by all means! I forgot to tell anyone about this. Time is still kicking me in the ass!

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P.S.. I got nothing in the mail..LOL 

And yes again - It's ready!

[SE]

How about some tele? love the bass and vox.

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How about some tele? love the bass and vox.

Sweet - Bring it on, John!  Feel free to come up with some more lyrics and as always you are free to add some of your vocal talent as well!

[Gnasty]

P.S.. I got nothing in the mail..LOL 

And yes again - It's ready!

I`m such a harasser!!