"Better Than Any TV Show"

[musicsongwriter]

Thank you for reading/comments/suggestions
My lyric was posted on 50/90 and Donna D kindly helped me to tighten it up

"Better Than Any TV Show"
© 2010 by Nadia Cripps

(v1)
It's a sunny day, not raining
It shouldn't need explaining
Why a stroll outside would do us good
A roam around the neighbourhood

Chorus
So much to see, we'll laugh and talk
Of things that please us as we walk
Keep it simple, let's just go
It's better than any TV show

(v2)
Let's get ready, stop delaying
Mister sun might not be staying
The day won't last, please don't refuse
You still don't have a real excuse

Chorus
So much to see, we'll laugh and talk
Of things that please us as we walk
Keep it simple, let's just go
It's better than any TV show

Bridge
Put my suggestion to the test
Turn off the TV, come with me
Give your eyes a little rest
I swear the world will look brand new
When you've breathed in air that's fresh

Chorus
So much to see, we'll laugh and talk
Of things that please us as we walk
Keep it simple, let's just go
It's better than any TV show

Oh so much better than any TV show

[Gritter]

Great lyrics...I agree with it all!

[musicsongwriter]

Thank you Sandy, so glad you like it
Nadia

[Geir]

I find that the simple things in life are often the hardest to put into words/music. These are really good lyrics expressing feelings I can relate too.

Great job.

[musicsongwriter]

Thank you Geir.

I don't have music to it so if anyone feels inspired please let me know
Oh, and I'm afraid I don't sing. Well, I do but you don't want to hear it (I'm sure of that!)