Robin's song - draft, needing singer and musicians

Started by stoman, October 09, 2010, 01:04:46 PM

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Here is another demo. This lyric was written by Michael Perry. Again, the draft is very quick & dirty as I did not have much time for music lately.

Anybody interested in helping me turn this into a song? Singers, drummers, bassists, ... ?

Robin's Song
((C)Michael Perry, 2008)

I'm sitting here now, thinking of you
as I write down the words to this song, for so long
wearing my feelings on my sleeve
committing what my hearts always known

For all my life I felt so consumed
in a sea storm dragging me down
as soon as I saw you that's when I knew
up from despair, pulling me through

From the feeling of peace
I've now found in your embrace
to your comforting smile
that has never once let me down

Just wanted to tell you, from the bottom of my heart
you mean everything to me
our love we share, builds us up
so nothing, no nothing will ever tear us apart

When I look in your eyes
searching deep in your soul
I see the warmth of your face
that always stood out from the crowd

From the lingering of every kiss, against my lips
or the way your soft breathing, lulls me to sleep
with the comfort of your body lying next to me
my emotions for you will always run deep

Just wanted to tell you, from the bottom of my heart
you mean everything to me
our love we share, builds us up
so nothing, no nothing will ever tear us apart


Regards,
  Steffen

stoman

This is the bedtrack for vocals. Don't forget it's just a draft! Once the vocals are done the music will be tailored and enhanced.

And, again: If anybody would like to do a guitar version (or anything else), feel free! But please, if possible, I'd like to have clean seps for the final mix. No pre-mixed material (except for demos, of course).

It's not that I think my mix will be better! I just want to have the raw material for myself, so I can remix my songs whenever I please.

I hope somebody will be game for this song. This would be one of the first lyrics of Mike's being turned into music.

Regards,
  Steffen

stoman

Nobody interested? Is this song idea so bad ... ?

I know, I am biased ... but I like it ... somehow. :D

Regards,
  Steffen

GianniC

I could try to sing your song...if you still need a singer  ;)

Ciao from Italy
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stoman

Ciao, Gianni! Ma certo! Give it a try - I can't wait to hear it! :)

Saluti da Germania!


alfstone

Quote from: GianniC on December 18, 2010, 05:14:01 AMI could try to sing your song...if you still need a singer  ;)

Ciao from Italy

....ma guarda un pò chi si rivede....

 :D :D :D :D :D

Ciao, Gianni "Salentu"!!!

Benvenuto, qui è una grande famiglia, ti troverai benissimo.

For the "not-speaking-Italian world": Gianni is a singer from Italy, mainly classical style. I thought I could meet him here too, so it's my welcome here to him and his voice...

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GianniC

Ok Steffen,
as you can see Alfredo immediately discovered me here...It's my first exprience here dann ich ein wenig Zeit brauche. Hast du ein bisschen Geduld? I have to organize for the recording but I have started already to study your song. I'll try to do my best.

Bis bald
Ciao Steffen, ciao Alfredo
Gianni
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stoman

Take all the time you need, Gianni!

Hey, you know more German than I know Italian. I'm envious! ;)

Feel free to change the melody if necessary. It's only meant as a rough guide.

Regards,
  Steffen


Speed Demon

I will fire up my bass on this. Won't take long.

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Right next to my mashed potatoes.

holdempok

post the vocal part. not necessarly sing but talk it and I will give it a try.
Why don't we do it on the road?