The Old Guitarist (Picasso Songbook)

[FuzzFace]

Thanks, I'm glad you like it - I did stay pretty much true to form, but I ran out of music so I lost a verse. Sorry  

Like I said, I think in this case you improved upon the words I wrote.

Some lines are more important than others.  For example, "This time has been so blue" is a reference to Picasso's Blue Period (of which this work is a product).  So I'm glad that stayed in.

But your final version is perfect.  I wouldn't want you to change it.

[Gritter]

Wow! Mark...this is perfect. You've painted the old guitarist with music. The words and music are the perfect match. Brilliant. Please don't change a thing.

[Kenneth]

When I saw this post, I got giddy before clicking on it!

Me too! I didn't expect that, but i'm getting into this, almost wishing there was another song available. Such fun.
Mark, wonderful job, I wouldn't change it, sometimes the magic is there in the  first couple hours, and looks like you found it!

[Satchwood]

Wow Mark, flippin brilliant song!  ~  Brilliant writing Fuzzface!

Wish i would have jumped in, but was kind of tide up....

This Picasso Album is turning out to be great already !!

[lg]

Simply Superb Guys....
Mark you did a knock-out job on this one....
Just beautiful.

LG

[Gnasty]

NICE!! That intro had me thinking?? What's he gonna do next?

You made the song yours AND to me you delivered the lyrics and message in the song.

Fab Vox!! Love it bro!!

[corryhully]

enjoyed that, very evocative and somehow all the more for its lack of production. great !

[cuthbert]

Fantastic song, Mark - loved the opening riff and all the dynamics you put into it, and your own style is stamped in true.

Now I've gotta get myself in gear...

[Gary F]

Great intro!! Awesome vox delivery!!!Great lyrics!!!
Nice job guys!!!
Gary

[Geir]

Mark!!!!!!

Fantastic !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Speechess!