Holding on

[Gu Djin]

Strange one for me!  I was trying out some ideas for a"pop"/"country"  type song.  This is as far as I got.  Not perfect I know, but I was trying to push my borders and do something closer to the mainstream.  However I am now stuck.  I can't seem to put words that I like together in this style.  Anyway have a listen and let me know what you think

Cheers!

[launched]

I'm already humming something with a Lou Reed style vocal intonation, maybe that might work.

At any rate I like how this flows along. Very cool!

Mark

[danieldesete]

Hum... Makes Me wanna have a drink... a nice cocktail... and have another listen

[Bluesberry]

You caught a real nice Canadian Alt.Country vibe here  .  Harmonized low key, melloow vocals would sound good.  Cowboy Junkies vocals.  Sing about drinking a bottle of wiskey and going out for a long walk on the dark empty streets, your girl on your mind, feeling sorry for what you did/said, it starts to rain and you can see your reflection in the dark shiny streets.  Regret swirls around like a flock of agitated crows on a prarie field.  The road goes on and on.  The sun coming up as you come to your front door, time to face up to the hurt.

[T.C. Elliott]

I really dig this track. I'm looking forward to hearing more.

[Oldrottenhead]

i added a vocal to this track its here https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=8453.0;topicseen

[Kevin Mammoth]

BB is right, bit of a Cowboy Junkies on this one - maybe a touch more upbeat optimism in this track though.  Very nice!

[Groundy]

Otd Bump, its a good in, Gu Djin, not heard from you for a while... Alex

[guitarron]

Good bump. Nice mellow tune.

[Zoltan]

Will be interesting to hear where this song is heading on. I get the slightly drunken Lou Reed vibe from this. It's a bit rough in the edges yet still musically interesting and free flowing in a way. The ambience of this song makes me think of late night, or early morning (after staying up the whole night). The melodies are cool.