Country Heaven...by Neil Swanson.(.cp2o1o B.M.I)

[SwanSong]

THIS song i wrote while laid up in the hospital . lasst week with a foot infection gout
and cellulitus. doing better now . but sitll neeed rest and recovery with tons of meds
at home re antibiotics..and gout meds...lo...while laying in bed. this song hit me like
a brick. so worte down the chords. and threw it together this past weekend. my first
attempt at this genre , so dont b to harsh on me. and getting tht guitar effect going
country rock. when in hospital i said i wish i were in gods country not here. so i called
THIS SONG Country Heaven. think it has a good start and beat will b adding lyricsa dn
vocals later on . thanks for listening hopeu like it . take care NEIL............................

geir thans for the e mail peae is a great song and will b doing the strings sometime this week
anxious to see how it all fits together. so far sounds great. started b efore i i was admitted
to hospital last week.

[SwanSong]

PS. sorry forgot to upload song lo. must still b tired from meds . so here it is .
hope u like it see previous post. take care NEIL SWANSON ......................

[Greeny]

That's a really hot, driving riff you have going there. Good solid country rock. You need some vocals on this! Great work.

[Ted]

I like the guitar tone.  Telecaster?

The keyboard kind over overpowers everything.  Maybe bring it down in the next mix--the one with the vocals!

[Oldrottenhead]

i hope you are keeping well neil, this has a nice driving rhythm

[Redler]

Well played country song SwanSong! I agree with Greeny; this would be even better with vocals, perhaps with female vocals... Is Wiley still here??

- Kari

[SwanSong]

thanks all for the comments.. hey kari if u want to try vocals. go ahead and write
some lyrics lo. or if anyone know s someone who wants to collaborate..
will tone down keyboard on the vocal mix. but wanted a hard driving rythem
at the begging. of the song. to grab listeners attention. i guess it worked lo
in final mix. there will b improvemetns. re layering of tracks. and mixing.
of keyboards..again thanks for your comments. just had to record this
in my head laying in the hospital and thanks for the well wishes......cheers.!

[Redler]

hey kari if u want to try vocals. go ahead and write
some lyrics lo. or if anyone know s someone who wants to collaborate..

Thanks SwanSong, but I have written vocals only in Finnish. I don't mind ruin someone other's tunes

( I'm struggling with my first English lyrics - but on someday I'll make and sing it...or if someone has 'leftover' lyrics, you can send them to me... sorry, off topic)

 - Kari

[launched]

Very cool song, Neil - I like it a lot!

Mark

[Ferryman]

That guitar is real nice, really gives the country twang to this. I like the drums here, did you program them or use loops off the keyboard? They really help give it a good driving feel. Looking forward to how this develops.

Cheers,

Nigel