"Lovely Girl" Sometimes you just gotta go with it.

Started by charlygo, February 18, 2010, 12:59:10 AM

charlygo

Lovely Girl
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As I was cutting and pasting my way through this song I couldn't help but notice the end of the verses would alternate between landing on a measure or in the middle of one. I'm sure I snuck a measure with a different time signature in somewhere, but I'm not going to worry about it. 

LOVELY GIRL


LOVELY GIRL, WON'T YOU TALK TO ME
WHAT'S YOUR NAME, HONEY CAN'T YOU SEE
I WANT YOU, TO BE A PART OF MY LIFE
HOW CAN YOU, KNOW WHEN LOVE IS NEAR
IF ALL YOU DO, IS LIVE BY FEAR
WHY ARE YOU, AFRAID OF BEING REAL

GIRL WHY DON'T YOU TAKE A CHANCE
AND GET CLOSE TO ME
JUST MAKE MY OPEN ARMS
YOUR ONLY PLACE TO BE
GIVE YOUR LOVE TO ONE
WHO'LL ALWAYS BE TRUE
YOU CAN GIVE YOUR LOVE TO ME
I'LL TAKE CARE OF YOU

EYES OF BLUE, LEGS LONG AND LEAN
YOU'VE GOT TO BE, THE BEST I'VE SEEN
WHERE HAVE YOU, BEEN HIDING ALL MY LIFE
LETS GO FIND, A PLACE TO BE ALONE
LET ME TAKE YOU, TO MY MOUNTAIN HOME
CAN'T YOU SEE, I'M HUNGRY FOR YOUR LOVE

GIRL WHY DON'T YOU TAKE A CHANCE
AND GET CLOSE TO ME
JUST MAKE MY OPEN ARMS
YOUR ONLY PLACE TO BE
GIVE YOUR LOVE TO ONE
WHO'LL ALWAYS BE TRUE
YOU CAN GIVE YOUR LOVE TO ME
I'LL TAKE GOOD CARE OF YOU

LOVELY GIRL, WON'T YOU TALK TO ME
WHAT'S YOUR NAME, HONEY CAN'T YOU SEE
I WANT YOU, TO BE A PART OF MY LIFE
LETS GO FIND, A PLACE TO BE ALONE
LET ME TAKE YOU, TO MY MOUNTAIN HOME
CAN'T YOU SEE, I'M HUNGRY FOR YOUR LOVE

GIRL WHY DON'T YOU TAKE A CHANCE
AND GET CLOSE TO ME
JUST MAKE MY OPEN ARMS
YOUR ONLY PLACE TO BE
GIVE YOUR LOVE TO ONE
WHO'LL ALWAYS BE TRUE
YOU CAN GIVE YOUR LOVE TO ME
I'LL TAKE GOOD CARE OF YOU


©2010 C.J.Gonsalves
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launched

I really liked the guitar solo in the end. Very unique sounding song.

Mark
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Frank53

Nice chord changes and tempo. Terrific solo. Good work.

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Oh well ........

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Gritter

Unique and very enjoyable...shazam! (I don't know why that particular expression came to mind but what the heck...this is cool!)

Satchwood

Cool song Charly and welcome!!  Got a dance pop jazzy, Phil Collins, or Steely Dan vibe - nice post - you got a unique voice!  I also like that solo at the end!
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A very well produced song , nice content , love the guitar , really all round good listen

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This is interesting to listen to the first time, trying to guess where it's going to go. A very creative and nice production.
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lemgandi

Ow, Ow Ow!!! Seems like the first couple of verses are seriously out of tune on the vocals.