New Member - New Song

Started by danarm101, July 27, 2009, 04:46:17 PM

OsCKilO

I think a great Talent has Just entered the room......

Just stunning!

Peace Bro

Cant wait to hear more!

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Greeny

This grabbed me right from the off. The little chimed accents are brilliant. You sing and play this beautifully, but what's special is the songwriting skill - you have bags of that on this evidence. I agree with the others about the panning; if you take the guitars a bit more left and right, you'll find a new soundscape. I sometimes take the backing vox panned far left and right too. All personal taste though!

What an excellent introduction. Wonderful work. And very original too. The only slight comparison is David Gray, but this is more subtle.

SE

Hey great song well sung and well played and welcome aboard.
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guitarron

Quote from: Flash Harry on July 28, 2009, 06:38:15 AMNice song, you have a great voice for this style, it works really well.

I have to agree with the panning comments, a bit of separation will but some 'air' into the sound stage. But that aside it's well recorded and well delivered. Thanks for sharing.

Welcome to the board.

agreed -very solid tune man-kudos-great vox


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danarm101

Chaps, thanks very much for all your comments - bit overwhelming really.....ive taken on board the panning and production tips, will look to improve on my next effort - which isnt too far away (thanks to a week off work).

To BossMicroBRew, this effort was played on a 12 string Yamaha acoustic, an FG-413S-12 to be precise!

Once again, cheers for the comments.

Cheers,
Dan
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ksauers

Well wriiten! Thank you for this. Just need to tell you I'm sitting out by the pool, catching the rays, enjoying your song in my headphones. A great end to a day! Welcome aboard!

Bigsky

welcome to the best br site around, very well done. I hope to hear more soon.

Doug

Rata-tat-tat

Welcome aboard... I thought this was a great song. Very easy to listen too. I agree with some other comments... it sounded a little thin. But then again I tend to overdo it sometimes with the  stereo width. It is food for thought though. Anyhow... this is just great.
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SteveG

Great song, well played and sung. Cant fault it .... apart from the panning of course :D