we watch them burn while they are in flames

Started by thetworegs, May 22, 2024, 03:23:42 PM

thetworegs

We watch while they are in flames
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It was raining today so no gardening so I finally decided to start experimenting with my oil painting to find that the kids had nicked all my brushes so it was back to the keyboard and guitars and this one came out ........
Well she danced amongst the flowers til the day that she died
Untrust worthy unfaithfull is what he testified
No amount of belief will asway his guilt
The cuckolds soul could not be rebuilt

We watch them burn
while they are in flames
We watch them burn
while they are in flames

Now She dances amongst the roses everyday
Moving to a beat as her ashes  float away
The man of the cloth preaches a prayer
for the one who got lost who is no longer there

We watch them burn
while they are in flames
We watch them burn
while they are in flames

The saviour is back theres a sermon on the mount
To tell the  the unbeleaver what the truth is about
The lyer sits quiet too afraid to speak
While the barman pulls a beer for the one who critiques

We watch them burn
while they are in flames
We watch them burn
while they are in flames

The judge hands out time like the speaking clock
While the innocent parties laugh and mock
Hemlock is the drink of the day
As the hangman sweats watching the bodies sway

We watch them burn
while they are in flames
We watch them burn
while they are in flames
We watch them burn
while they are in flames
   
If Life is a dream then use your imagination

StephenM

Do you record the lead guitar first or the vocals? 

this is really great Trev.  the lyrics are amazingly poignant. 
this is top shelf creating..
 
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         you can call me anything you like.  Just don't call me late for dinner

StephenM

 
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         you can call me anything you like.  Just don't call me late for dinner

kenny mac

Like the bass groove on this.
Your guitar work is great on this too.
Like the panned guitar that's clean,sounds like a gretch.
Vocal is spot on.
 ???  ??? nice one.


Mike_S

Brilliant Trev... big sound. Those are some fine lyrics you wrote too.

Excellent stuff.

Mike
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Blooby


Loved the tune, but the lyrics are especially good on this one.

Blooby