That River Girl and Me (Maxit & Greeny)

[maxit]

Jean Pierre message woke me up from oblivion lol, so here is the last one (after some times) from me and greeny. We made some efforts to sound different from previously, can you tell (I'm asking for your help here)?

That River girl and Me

Watching the reflections
Of moonbeams on the tide
Singing fishes from the deep
With mouths all open wide
Upstream in the badlands
A song about the sea
Just for that river girl and me

Below the radar and rolling in the green
I know exactly what you need
Out of the sunlight so cool and so serene
A crown of Wildflowers for the queen

A river's like a story
A beginning and an end
And we are swimming through her chapters once again
Upstream where the willows
Bow down so mournfully
Just for that river girl and me

The sun anoints our foreheads
The sun anoints our eyes
The golden-smiled priestess
Of summer so divine
Upstream in the heartlands
She snakes towards the sea
Just for that river girl and me

Below the radar and rolling in the green
I know exactly what you need
Out of the sunlight so cool and so serene
A crown of Wildflowers for the queen

[hardlock]

This is one outstanding song my friends! Wow, composition, lyrics, vocals, performance and production get straight A's in my book! Kudos to a job well done.

[Redler]

Beautiful lyrics and music - a heartfelt summer/love song. Great playing, Max and Tim's voice fits like a glove on it! Bravo guys!

[DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee]

Wonderful song. That acoustic guitar fingerpicking is brilliant. Great stuff. Music, lyrics and vocals are great. Very catchy chorus.

[Bluesberry]

Superb fingerstyle guitar....recorded beautifully....and then the Green man delivers....

[cuthbert]

Beautiful lazy summer song, gents - excellent fingerpicking and vocals & lyrics.

[kenny mac]

This a beautiful song ,it does sound very different.
Lovely guitar picking.
Reminds me of Simon and Garfunkel.
The lyrics are excellent as is the  vocal.
Would have liked to hear a version with a harmony vocal alongside the main vocal,bet it would  open it right up.
A great collaboration guys.

[Ron D Bowes]

Very cool. Super guitar picking. Great vocal and lyrics. Very polished!

[des0free]

Definitely a different vibe than previous efforts, but every bit as good as all the others. Really great guitar playing and tone, and vocals/lyrics. How was that guitar recorded? For me this evoked Paul Simon - Ah, I see that kenny said that too.  The light backing vocal adds a lot too.

[StephenM]

such a lovely song... I heard this the other day on my phone but couldn't comment.. loving the vocals and lyrics but the sounds of the strings are super duper.

I just attended a Renaissance Fare in Sterling, NY and I would say this music would fit right toward some of what I heard there (which, the music alone was worth the price of admission)...

sounds like a standup bass on this and some really sweet picking ... killer tune folks!