Idealistic

Nelson · August 17, 2021, 01:34:09 PM

A lovely song. It does draw you in as it goes.
As for your vocals they come across as authentic and honest but as someone whose never satisfied with my vocals, I get it, so keep at it til you're satisfied. I like your production notes, giving a peek behind the scenes and plotting your growth... excellent.
Indeed a beautiful piece of work.

Ferryman_1957 · August 18, 2021, 04:15:56 AM

I love this Warren, it's so atmospheric. Kind of U2 meets Joy Division, I love that bass work and bass sound. The keys/pads/effects sound great and I love the way it all ebbs and flows and draws you in.

The only tweak I would consider is to try to get the vocals clearer. There's some superb lyrics in there and I thought your performance fitted the track well. They are just getting a bit lost for me in the mix, maybe because there's a lot competing in the same frequencies as the vocals. Some eq tweaks might help, I don't know if you used a compressor on them but tweaking that could help balance the quiet/loud parts without having to boost the volume.

BTW I loved the part where it went all echoey. Great track.

Geir · August 18, 2021, 04:43:19 AM

Very nice

Love it

Hook · August 18, 2021, 04:55:37 AM

Yup, I dig brother. Always love the rain.
Rock on!

BerryPatch · August 22, 2021, 09:13:13 PM

These are some seriously brilliant lyrics on here. Truly filled with a depth but yet it still retains the dreamlike quality of the song. I love how the music ebs and flows and those distorted backing vocals are kind of haunting in a way. Love the originality of the song, your vocal tracks have all been so great and I hope you have more to come.