Planets

[godinqc]

I was playing around with chord progressions  Em G A C and came up with this ..
I have to work on my Lyrics and adding bass , a better drum track.. etc ..  but any feedback is appreciated

Also let me know if you think the mastering could be louder or better .. I do not have Studio monitors yet and mixing and mastering via headphones but I find something the sound is not loud enough after the mastering ..
My recording space is very small and my budget also  , I was looking to buy Presonus Eris 4.5, the reviews are good and the speaker is not too big.
Has anyone have used them  ?

Thanks and have a great day 

[tonyc]

nice song love the guitar sound and the mix sounds great to me . top marks ......cheers tony cee

[StephenM]

I love this x100!.... vocals are ethereal and my kind of thing...the mellow laid back vibe followed by the ass busting guitars...killer mentality...kind of rock meets new age meetsvpsychadelic....kind of like rock paper scissors...for me  rock always trumps but the way you made this is a great amalgamation....my 16 year old son digs it.

[Mike_S]

I think you have done a good job on the mixing. It sounds terrific in my headphones anyway. The heavy guitar that comes in every now and again is a great choice. Great tune...

Mike

[Greeny]

Love the chord progressions. There's a James Bond feel on the part from 00:56. And the incredible lead guitar adds to a feeling of something big and epic. Sounds great on headphones, balance-wise. If it was me, I'd pan the guitars out a bit more. But it all sounds great. That end section is AMAZING! What a fantastic piece of work.

[Ferryman_1957]

I love the composition and the playing, it all works really well and I love the end section. Beautiful lead work and I think your vocals are fine, the gentle style suits this music well. You're in tune, that's the most important thing!

I can't really comment on the mix as I am listening on headphones, will try to listen on monitors later. But it all sounds well arranged in the stereo image in the cans.

[DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee]

It all sounds good to me, nice simple chord progression but you sure made an excellent song from it. Kind of gave me a Radiohead vibe. Love the fuzzy guitars and the mellow synths and pads. Cool song. Great lyrics and vocals too

[godinqc]

Thanks for the great feedback ..
I finally ordered the Presonus Studio Monitors .. should get them this week .. will let you know how good they sound.
My little studio is starting to come together 

Have a great day ..

[Ferryman_1957]

I just listened on my monitors and it sounds pretty good. There's a few things I might personally tweak but overall I think you will be happy when you hear it on your monitors.

[StephenM]

Holy Smokes...I just had another listen....

this sounds great in my small presonus monitors on the computer at work... this is really my kind of thing...it's IT'S FANFLIPPINTASTIC

the vocals and the guitars are top notch..

btw I have the Presonus 3.5 and they are very good...in my home studio I use JBL monitors but these little Presonus do a very good job as well

and that Rhythm guitar you use here is wicked good!