To Make You Feel Better-Original

Started by Johnbee, May 06, 2021, 03:12:34 PM

Johnbee

To Make You Feel Better
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All of my life I felt that it was my responsibility to make the people closest to me happy 24/7/365. If they weren't, for whatever reason, I've felt that it was my fault and I was letting them down, even if their depression had nothing to do with me. I think my wife has finally convinced me that It's not always my fault.

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Featuring Toontrack EZ Keys & EZ Drummer 2, Session Strings Pro 2, Trilian Bass, Mini Dizi Flute plugin

 :) John B.

What can I do to address all that has been bothering you?
Is there anything I can say to ease the pain that still remains?
As I observe with saddened eyes a part of me also dies
So much time has been compromised for me

What can I offer you to make you love your life again?
Time has been so cruel to you. You have only your memories when
every morning was in sunlight
You never saw the cloudy sky
You didn't stop to think what would happen
after the thrill had died.

Are there any words to express the lowly way I feel right now
I truly wish there was something I could do
to chase your blues away somehow
Time is precious. Love is golden
as every second matters more
While unto you I've been so beholden
My way with words is so poor.


c 2021 John Bowen Music

Mike_S

That's a really deep subject matter and it's brave to put it on the page like that, but very delicately and beautifully done. Being prone to darker moments, I really get this. A very touching song John.

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StephenM

wowweeeeeee..... big stuff again JohnB....this is SteelyDan good and Boz would be green with envy.... you have really achieved and continue to excel excellence in music composition... lots of ear treats here too... I am listening on my JBL studio ref mons and it sounds great... your bass presentation and drums are wonderul and full... lots of space in between all the sounds...which is what the masters all do...
still love your voice too....

I think Songcrafters is heaven....so good...so good...so good....
 
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         you can call me anything you like.  Just don't call me late for dinner

TPB

Touching subject great lyrics and the musical delivery is great
Tim
Life is not about the number of Breathes you take, it is the amount of times your breathe is taken away

hardlock

Powerful yet beautiful piece! You have the best progressions. Great build and execution and dig the flute lead break.
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My Originals:
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My Collaborations:
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Those things we take for granted - when we're young and immature - will surely return to haunt us when we're old and insecure

DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee

Nothing wrong feeling like that ,you're obviously a considerate caring person. Should be more people like that in the world. :)
Its a lovely song, a sensitive subject and you've created a great song here. I like your vocals and really good music and production. Yeah that flute solo is wonderful.
Darren
I have 2 profiles on this site, (NOW COMBINED INTO ONE PROFILE PAGE)
 One is a musical partnership with Keith Allen, ( we record songs as "The Devil's Toupee").
The 2nd one is for my other musical projects and collaborations. (DarrenG)
Thanks for listening.

Greeny

No, it's definitely not always your fault. But it's good to be sensitive enough to ask that question - then make a beautiful and thoughtful lyric from it. Musically, you always deliver pure class. Melodies to die for, and incredible arrangements. Already onto my 2nd listen as there's a lot of lovely detail to absorb. Lovely stuff!

Redler

You've written a real fine and touching music again, John. This have many wonderful nuances, like nice bass line and string additions. You're an excellent songwriter and you're able to make tasty arrangements, too.

Enjoyable listening, like many times begore.
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tonyc

nice touching song john , if the world was full of people like you it would be a great place to be , great tune and lyrics , superb john . cheers tony cee ....
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Ferryman_1957

Amazing work John. It's a beautifully written and arranged song, with really sensitive and delicate keyboard work. The dynamics of the song are fantastic and your vocals fit like a glove. But it's the lyrical content that really made it for me. I've been in this situation many times so I know exactly where you are coming from, and you get the feelings and emotions over so well. Beautifully done and it really resonated with me. Bravo, and thanks.