You burn but your soul lives on

Started by thetworegs, April 08, 2021, 01:45:28 PM

thetworegs

You burn but your soul lives on
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Came up with this one tonight while the kids were at horse riding lessons just me and my Gibson ..... hope you enjoy ......Thanks for listening
The days of youth pass by quickly
Like a dagger of truth they tell no lie
The moments with love are so fleeting
They get lost to the dark passages of time

Sweet is love
Sweet is heart
Sweet is the desire to turn back time
The desire to turn back time

The lesson, are not learned fast boy
Time doesn't give you a second chance
You don't get to make any mistakes you have to get it right now
cause Life it does not last

Sweet love
Sweet desire
Your heart burns upon the funeral pyre
You burn but your soul lives on
You burn you can't turn time
You can't turn it back
Before it's gone

Love is the something you ort to hold on to
Hate, well just let it go
Don't ponder on misfortune
Let the hope inside you grow and grow

Sweet is love
Sweet your heart
Sweet is your, desire to turn back time
your desire to turn back time
It can't be done

It can't be done

Hope

Sweet love

The desire

The sweet desire of love

The sweet  desire for love
The sweet desire to turn back time

To turn it back

To the beginning

Turn back time

The days of youth pass by quickly
Like a dagger of truth they tell no lie
The moments with love are so fleeting
They get lost to the dark passages of time

Sweet is love
Sweet is your heart
Sweet is your desire to turn back time
your desire to turn back time
You burn but your soul lives on 
You burn but your soul lives on 
You burn but your soul lives on 
 


You burn but your soul lives on 



   
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Mike_S

Brilliant stuff Trevor... like the lyrics and sentiment on this one. Sung with passion and brilliantly played too.

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T.C. Elliott

Ouch, this one hits too close to home. Although, I forget I'm not one of the senior songcrafters *puffs out chest*
The recording is a little quiet. But that's just an excuse to turn it up to eleven. It's a cool acoustic sound. This recording has a good feeling of space to it, atmosphere.
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StephenM

fact....  love the lyrics... and the way you weave them into the guitar...  i could hear this on open mic or as a single in a pub or coffee shop...that chord riff in there sounds familiar...but I can't place it...just that short piece you do
 
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IanR

I really like this. Sounds like a Led Zeppelin song. I was waiting for the big change up with the drum fills and wall of sound coming in.






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Greeny

For such a stripped-back song there's a lot of sophistication going on. The vocal melody (and the vocals) are superb. And that's a very poignant lyric. Really works - on all levels.

DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee

It's great how you can churn out a song in the time your family are out. :) I really like this Trevor, like your other songs you seem to produce these catchy songs with that timeless sound each time. It is very similar sound to led zep which is good as I like them. Nice tone in the guitar and great vocals and lyrics. :)
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Ferryman_1957

Impressive songwriting, you hold the interest well with just an acoustic and vocals for such a long song. Great vocals and very poignant lyrics for us older folks.......

Pete C

Good song Trev....the lyrics really hit home.

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Bluesberry

Quote from: IanR on April 09, 2021, 06:41:43 AMI really like this. Sounds like a Led Zeppelin song. I was waiting for the big change up with the drum fills and wall of sound coming in.
yup.....great song....this one really could use some full band treatment.....drums....bass.....lead guitar......the works.....there is a monster here hiding behind the curtain

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