Smoke and mirrors

Started by thetworegs, April 25, 2018, 05:45:26 AM

thetworegs

I had some time today so i started doodling and this came out ......Thanks for listening
The clock strikes midnight and Jennys heading home
Peter, makes do with bus and he sits there on his alone
He's Watching the streets fill with people as the the raindrops form to the glass
the falling beads of water race neither one cares who comes  last

Life is made from mirrors and smoke
Till the image hits the floor like a mirror and gets broke
Like the stamp on letter that would never arrived
Like a  war without sorrow where the dead are alive
Like a politician who Told the truth just to tell more lies
 
Henry sat on his settee up there in his high rise flat
He was 54 years old he was unhappy and very fat
No one read his note he'd written with his own fare hand
Now  all the kings men can't put Henry together again

Life is made from mirrors and smoke
Till the image hits the floor like a mirror and gets broke
Like the stamp on letter that never arrived
Like a  war without sorrow where the dead are alive
Like a politician who Told the truth just to tell more lies

now, Can you really believe whats there in front of you
Can you really believe what you feel is real
Can you really believe today in anything
When the truth you see
 around you
is so surreal
When the truth thats made
is to hurt not heal


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Jenny's finding it hard to bring her children up
Their father died from an overdose of that overprescribed drug
The ghetto is littered with bodies but no-one seems to care
She goes to the cupboard but its always bare

Life is made from mirrors and smoke
Where The image hit the floor like a mirror and then it broke
Like the stamp on letter that would never arrived
Like a  war without sorrow where the dead are alive
Like a politician who Told the truth just to tell more lies

Sarah went to the concert with her crew of two
she"d waited since Christmas for this day to come true
It was a beautiful day ooh how the sun blazed away
Then a Flash for light and Sarah was taken away

Life is made from mirrors and smoke
Till the image hits the floor like a mirror and gets broke
Like the stamp on letter that never arrived
Like a  war without sorrow where the dead are alive
Like a politician who Told the truth just to tell more lies

Smoke and Mirrors
Reg
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If Life is a dream then use your imagination

Groundy

Nice one Trev,as always.
Well done....

Alex

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If I had known i was going to be this thirsty this morning I'd of had another Beer last night...

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Redler

Fantastic songwriting and performance. Fine job with the lyric, too!

Well done, Terv!

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Ferryman_1957

Great lyrics Trev, you conjure some compelling images and touch on some deep subjects there. Nicely performed as always, and a great vocal performance.

Groundy

Back for another listen now I have more time,
Top class my friend,
Brilliant songwriting and performance.


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If I had known i was going to be this thirsty this morning I'd of had another Beer last night...

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pjd1

Nice one Trev superb recording mate

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Cheers
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Gritter

the double tracked vocals sound awesome. Really great song writing...lyrically, melodically a winner.   

Kenneth

Flawless playing, it reminds me of something Meatloaf would do.
Congrats!
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Mike_S

Great original song Trev. I love the lyrics.

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Speed Demon

Excellent work, Trevor. The writing and vocal are top notch.

Nice guitar work as well.

You rock!


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