Original Song

sing? · October 11, 2015, 04:37:17 PM

Hello again to the people at Songcrafters,

I haven't thought of a name for this one. There are two guitar tracks bass and drums. There are certain things I like about it but I'm not sure how good it is.

Nick

Hook · October 11, 2015, 07:00:19 PM

I really like it too, was it 9min. long. I'm on my iPad and sometimes it starts over in the middle of the tune but usually won't end and I heard the ending for sure. That's not a critique because I didn't notice I was just jamming. The only thing that I might reconsider is your staccato praise endings in what feels like a chorus to me, I want the strings to ring there. there was a 3rd or 4th section I really dug, slightly faster/complex picking pattern. Toss in some lead lines, slide maybe or horns or an oboe...cool tune.
Rock on!

Groundy · October 17, 2015, 11:51:50 PM

Nice one Nick, good sound.
Gavdos would be a good name for it....
Well done..

Alex

Groundy · October 17, 2015, 11:52:02 PM

Nice one Nick, good sound.
"Gavdos" would be a good name for it....
Well done..

Alex

Johnny Robbo · October 18, 2015, 05:02:38 AM

You definitely have something here. It (perhaps) could do with a little more polish - tightening up the timing here and there. Also, the drums could do with being a bit "stronger" sounding. Other than that, I'd say it's a winner - you have a great melodic sense which is apparent in this. A really enjoyable piece