'Mothership' - Greeny Original

Started by Greeny, May 27, 2014, 03:21:08 AM

Tangled Wires

Excellent song, and although the temptation must have been to keep the electric, bass and drums in, this sounds perfect to me in this form.

Top vocal and guitar melodies, and the fabulous arrangement lets it all flow so wonderfully well and does give it a folky feel, but with an edge.

This lends itself to be a cracking addition to your live solo sets.


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Pamala

enjoyed this sweet tune...the simplicity, the harmonies...well done.

Satchwood

Great sounding song!  I'm lovin the vocals, lyrics, and rhythmic jangly strumming and instrument panning!!
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Nelson

As you should be proud of it, it's a very well crafted piece.
Love the vocals and the guitar but I must admit I found myself leaning in for the bass, in the chorus.

Way to show restraint, stripping it back to the bare necessities, yet still having a full sound in support of the mothership.
Brilliant

Hell man you are on  Fire.
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kenny mac

Wow this is awesome,absolutely fantastic .
So fresh and clear.
I love the harmonys and the acoustic sounds great.
Book me on the next flight on that mothership :)
Well done greeny,a belter of a song
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Redler

Stunning playing and the harmonies are just INCREDIBLE GOOD!! Excellent song!
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SwanSong

HI Tim simply marvelous well thought out and well structured
original song. great lyrics. and wonderful vocal.s  and the mix
is outstanding. great production. congrats  well worth another
bump to the top . congrats 2 thumbs up NEIL.!!

T.C. Elliott

The sound of those guitars got me right from the start. I definitely hear the attraction. When I first read your post I was thinking a good arrangement might be to build up to a full arrangement somewhere. But I think it works very well just as it is. Your vocals sound good as always and the title/hook works very well. I definitely like this one as well.
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steelguitar

Sounds like a classic... lennon-esque talent

Really fantastic songwriting, wonderful arrangements...

Love your bridge...

For me, you are one of the most talented guy here

Great production and instrument performance

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