"Please Please Please"

[boneonbone]

The one's a new genre for me, part country, part rockabilly, call it countribilly.   Any resemblance in this song to friends living or dead is purely coincidental.

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Please Please Please
© Copyright 2014
          

 Verse 1      
She was a waitress at a diner in New Hampshire, way up north on highway 3-0-2.
I was singing with my buddies in a rock band, when she waltzed right in to do what she would do
She said "please please please I want to bring you to your knees,   if I could".

Verse 2
I thought about the offer on the table, took me fifteen seconds to decide.
Put my key straight into the ignition, fired 'er up and took her for a ride      
And she said, "please please please c'mon and bring me to my knees",  yes I would .

Bridge 1:
                              
We were young and living life full open throttle,
Collecting markers on the open road,
I knew she knew what both of us were after,
All turbocharged and circuit overload.

Bridge 2:
So young and living life full open throttle,
But the gig was quickly coming to an end,
Wasn't easy to give up the summer joy ride,
So I circled back and saw her once again.

Verse 3:
But her daddy came to visit at the same time, he reeked of booze and looked me in the eye,
Said "thank you boy for screwin' up the summer",  I shot right back "the pleasure was all mine",
There'd be no " please please please" and no buckling at the knees, as it stood,
Would have been "pleased pleased pleased" with one more opportunity, if I could...yes I would
 

[thetworegs]

thats some great mix you have going on with those guitars...love it!!

[Burtog]

i agree the mix is really good, everything is so crisp and clear. The lyrics are great, nice that you added them to your post.

[Redler]

Very nice composition - melodic and catchy! The chrystal clear production is icing on the cake! Enjoyable listening!

[Jarle]

Well composed song.

[Gritter]

Sounds really good. it's got my toe tappin'!

[boneonbone]

Thank you for listening and for your feedback.  I did just add a Boss Rhythm arrangement and a piano track (from a friend) in the current version.

[Groundy]

Nice one ,well composed, and such a nice clear sound.......Alex

[SwanSong]

Simply marvelous very country and wonderful l feel to it
lyrics are well written and so is the music to it. this has
good potential for film or tv. wish u the best NEIL.!1

[MoreMuSic]

cool and nice song to start my monday morning - thank you