Making Plans For Life

Started by The Gobi Desert Canoe Club, January 15, 2014, 06:38:29 AM

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Hi all, I was in a super market the other day and down one aisle there was a group of woman one being particulary distressed. Being nosy I edged over and had a listen, the distressed woman had just been dumped by her long time boyfriend and was very tearful and angry. As I was passing she came out with the expression "I was making plans for life", hence the song title. Hope you enjoy.  Roscoe

p.s I think the intro's a bit too long

Desert nights can freeze you like her smile can
There's only ice left in her eyes
No pity left for any man
She's so tired of hearing lies

She was
Making plans for life
She was
Making plans for life

Never knew a hurt could cut so deep
Like a steel band round her heart
When she'd given him all the love she had
He just tore it all apart

She was
making plans for life
She was
Making plans for life

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thetworegs

It paid off being nosey.......Nice song...
   
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steelguitar

Nice song!!!
A phrasing like Lou Reed...   :) ;D


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Jarle

Quote from: Roscoe on January 15, 2014, 06:38:29 AM...
p.s I think the intro's a bit too long
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I do not agree, beautiful song.
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Redler

Very nice songwriting - liked the smooth country ballad feel! Harmonies and lead guitar sound so sweet! Well done, Roscoe!
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Ferryman_1957

Love the lyrics to this one, what a great way to get inspiration. Intro sounded fine to me because the song is a kind of slow and atmospheric, so the steady buildup is fine. The guitar melody/harmonies are lovely so you're quite happy to let them wash over you. All IMO of course. A bit different and really enjoyable. 

ODH

Lovely song, really hooks you in.

Quote from: Jarle on January 16, 2014, 12:41:14 PM
Quote from: Roscoe on January 15, 2014, 06:38:29 AM...
p.s I think the intro's a bit too long
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I do not agree, beautiful song.

I'm in two minds.  When the intro was first playing I was thinking it was too long, but in the context of the rest of the song actually it's okay.
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SE

Nice tune, great hook just shows that you can pick up ideas anywhere, great recording too loved it!!
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