Joi Wooi

[Douglas]

Here's something that was produced by freedom of riffing 

[Bobtail]

I like this tune so far, you've got a good start here and it would be good if you could work on it more and make it into a whole song.
Good playing and guitar tone is great.
    

[BillW]

Nice guitars going on there! Hope you keep working it. Great start.

[Jarle]

This sounds good. I hope you will develop this to a full song.

JOA

[64Guitars]

Sounds good but it's only 54 seconds long and seems to end abruptly. Was there supposed to be more?

[macman]

Nice drums and cool guitar, very clever. I wanna get into some songwriting and this helps inspire me. this should turn into a great song.

[SwanSong]

HI there has a great start for great song . would love to see this
developed more. enjoyed my listen thanks for sharing NEIL

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

As the others say, a great opening to what could be a great song...........Willie

[bruno]

Nice riff - and nice sound.
B