"Strangers" - new song, I'd love to hear your feedback :)

[olafgoesraawr]

http://www.ebutuoy.com/watch?v=2IsPy6Qn5vg

I have a tendency of writing songs while I'm on trains. Here's another one of my train tales, called "Strangers".

I'd really appreciate it if you could drop me a rating and a comment, and SHARE/SUBSCRIBE

Thanks guys, hope you like it!

Olaf

[Geir]

Very cool song Olaf! Cool to see your performance as well.

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BTW, Olaf ... that sounds more Norwegian than English ...... ?

[olafgoesraawr]

Thanks mate, it's great to hear feedback from more experienced songwriters.

Oh cool, I'll use this next time

And actually, I'm half Icelandic, but you were close (Y)

[Greeny]

I like your songwriting style and lyrics very much. You need to work this up into a more polished demo, because it's definitely good enough to deserve some more TLC and time. If you need any help with bass, lead guitar etc, there will always be people on here willing to collaborate. You'll need to have a good quality mp3 file for them to work with though.

It's good stuff - keep it up!

[Redler]

Great live stuff here!! I like your live performance! Which guitar you're playing? Nice tune, btw...

Kari

[Lounging McCoy]

Great idea for a song and well done.  I like how the guitar part had a railroady rhythm to it.

[olafgoesraawr]

Thanks a lot guys, it really means a lot

And Lounging McCoy, I didn't actually intend the railroady rhythm, but great, how suitable!