Original -You're gonna cry -remix Oct 10

Started by Glenn Mitchell, September 20, 2012, 01:19:01 PM

Glenn Mitchell



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I found the lyrics to this song in an old folder of mine.
Old- like 45 years ago.
It was a much younger, single me telling myself to get over a poor relationship move on.
I'd forgotten the melody so I just remade the whole thing.
(Caution-80's funk alert.)

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verse 1
Am
Dont be shy about saying your goodbye
You know it wouldn't have worked out anyway
No one's going to chase you and no one's going to make you happy
If you don't want to be
CH
         F         G            Am
You're gonna cry You're gonna cry You're gonna cry
You're gonna cry once or twice before you're loved
You're gonna cry You're gonna cry You're gonna cry
You're gonna cry once or twice before you're loved

Verse 2
Don't be afraid to take up some sweet maid
and give her all your heart and mind
Nothing in this life's worth having
if it isn't worked for, you're gonna find.

CH
Bridge/solo-- D Am D E7 E7 +F note

Verse 3
Throw out all those fears and dry those wasted tears
Before you lose another sunny day
Don't hide your face if there's no love in your space
Get outside and play
CH
Bridge/solo
Verse 1
CH x2
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Gritter

Very catchy! Great to hear a new/old one by you Glenner. Excellent production...vox are on the money. Reminds me of Eric Clapton and Robert Cray. Really grooves, love guitars. Bass line in verses could use some fixin...but this tune really rocks quite nicely.

Tangled Wires

Really cool funky song Glenn, and love that melodic booming bass

Nice to hear some new material from you.


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Oldrottenhead

nice one, nice hearing your younger thoughts mixed with your more experienced playing and singing.
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Geir

Very catchy indeed !

Excellent work Glenn, it's a hit !
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Oh well ........

T.C. Elliott

I'm really digging that guitar and how you've mixed (panned) the complimentary parts left vs right. Pretty interesting arrangement and playing and I like the upbeat take on the downer lyric.
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Hook

Funkalicious Glenn, I dig it!
Rock On!

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Because the Hook brings you back
I ain't tellin' you no lie
The hook brings you back
On that you can rely

ODH

Great groove, diggin' it.

For me, vocals a tad higher in the mix?

Don't hide your face if there's no love in your space...  Wise words, Glenn
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Yesterdays shatter, tomorrows don't matter

Glenn Mitchell

Thanks guys
Gritter, you are absolutely right. I'm redoing the bass and will repost.
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Farrell Jackson

Good writing, playing and singing Glenn! I really like the very active bass line towards the end....it rocks with funk!

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Test, test, one, two, three.....is this mic on?