Nimetön - Raine original

Started by Raine, November 03, 2011, 01:34:52 AM

Raine

Nimetön
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CityFest (banner image missing)


So here it goes for CityFest. A song about being in a City but longing away. Vocals are by my friend Jaakko, rest pretty much by me. Probably not the best first song post since I Mostly do more acoustic based songs :)

Here's the words in English, a raw translation, might not make a lot of sense:

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In this city
I sit smoking
On a glass balcony

Memories of the forestlands
Memories of the forestlands
In a pint of glass

Civilisation - a glass prison
I hate you
As I'm so weak I've fallen to you

And in Finnish:

Nimetön

Tässä kaupungissa
istun tupakalla
lasiparvekkeella

muistot metsämaista
muistot metsämaista
lasituopissa

sivistys - lasivankila
vihaan sinua
minä heikkouttani olen sinuun langennut

Recorded on a Zoom R16.





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Geir

Great first song post Tero !!

A great production and performance ! Love the melodic synth there that makes an interesting contrast to the somewhat dark melody of the vocals.

Love it !!

More please !
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maxit

yea! makes a lot of sense instead ... I like the song (the contrast melodic vs metal), and appreciate the possibility to hear the sound of your own language ! bravo !
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Oldrottenhead

what geir said absolutely love it, it has a bob hund vibe to it which is fab in my book.
whit goes oan in ma heid



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Redler

Excellent post to enter the site, Raine! I'm on my second listening and this sounds a lot to "Suomi-Rock" (Finnish Rock) genre, but with 'raw' guitar tone. It fits well to the spirit of lyrics. I loved the vocal melody and the keys gives nice flavor on this! More than nice post!

Kari
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OsCKilO

Great track!!!

The vibe is soooo good!

Love it!
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andy casson

Hi Raine, I enjoyed this one as well, great first post - kiitos!

andy

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Raine... this is a way cool track... has an 80's new wave feel with a metal splash. Great combo if I must say so.... Well done. Keep em comming.
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SwanSong

i agree with comment.s very cool sound and superb first post
congrats keep rocking. Cheers Neil .!

Hi and welcome aboard, brilliant post to start with and I'm looking forward to hearing more..............Willie
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