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"Goodbye"

Started by piljoe, September 29, 2009, 06:55:11 PM

piljoe

GOODBYE_
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....Here's my first completed tune w/ the micr br. I struggle w/ vocals, not being a vocalist..(HA!!)  Bass, Guitar, etc, all me.

OsCKilO

Great Stuff!

Like the Riffage in this!!!!


Got a Punk feel to it!

Great Vox as well!!!




Like it A lot Bro!!!

Can you post the lyrics?


Hope you post more of this stuff!


Great Work!!!!

Peace

T(Osckilo)
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piljoe

....man, thank you!!!  Hmmmm lyrics :
                                                     You Lie, You Cry, You Bleed on bended knees. You Try, You Die, From Little Nooses hang your greed. Control my Thoughts @ all costs, So full of hatetred that you bleed.
                                  GoodBye


Why do you waste, Why do you taste, when losing all is what you crave. No Boundries known, True feelings shone, Deaf Dumb & Blind thoughts are your needs
                                  Goodbye.

Tony W

dude, this is a nice rocking song! I completely dig it. This is definitely piepod material.

On the first listen, I used my pc speakers - a fairly good set. The vocals were low in the mix. On the second listen, I used cans, and it sounded very good.


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Bluesberry

Great song, great job here.  You sure have a strong voice, great stuff.  I really like it a lot.

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lexman

One some kind of way the vocals remind me on very old David Bowie stuff.

You did a good job.... 8)

piljoe

Oh man!!!! Thank you guys!!!!!!!!!

OsCKilO

My kind of Lyrics!

Catchy stuff!
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Boss BR-80
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Boss Micro BR
OsCKilO websites:  weebly.com  MySpace  SoundClick  ReverbNation
OsCKilO Albums:  "Masks"  "Easy London"

Also on Twitter for Live stuff..
Divert and sublimate your anger and potentially virulent emotions to creative energy


lg

Nice 1st post!
You should bring up the vox a little in the mix tho....

LG
nothing is real... So theres nothing to get hung about!

piljoe

I've gone back & forth w/ the vocal levels.....maybe I'll go a tad louder....