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Title: I Hear Music
Post by: Farrell Jackson on December 28, 2020, 01:31:36 PM

I Hear Music is collaboration with my musical friend Lorne.
Credits : Lorne - all the music and production. Farrell - All vocals, lyrics and vocal mix.
I Hear Music

(1) This primeval trail
Gets stranger at every turn
Tamping down the compost
With each and every step forward
(music interlude)
The redwoods tower
Like a New York skyscraper
With a thousand notes of music

(chr) I hear music in my head
It's whispering out a song
I hear music in my head
It's telling me to sing along

(2) As the water falls
The cool mist clears my mind
On it runs
Through a meadow to the sea
A million miles to be free

(chr) I hear music in my head
It's whispering out a song
I hear music in my head
It's telling me to sing along

(solo)

(chr) I hear music in my head
It's whispering out a song
I hear music in my head
It's telling me to sing along


Farrell Jackson © 11-25-20
Title: Re: I Hear Music
Post by: Blooby on December 28, 2020, 04:34:35 PM

Strong song, and that middle section is just incredible. Great tones, playing, singing, production...  Blimey.

Blooby

Title: Re: I Hear Music
Post by: Hook on December 29, 2020, 03:27:53 AM
Spectacular song, great lyrics and vocals and that middle section is outrageous. Love it brother!
Rock on!
Title: Re: I Hear Music
Post by: Greeny (No longer active) on December 29, 2020, 07:38:37 AM
Brilliant shifting dynamics that go from mellow to metal in such a clever, organic way. This is big, ambitious songwriting and perfectly delivered. That middle section is guitar heaven, lol. The panned guitars give such width and depth. Superb stuff.
Title: Re: I Hear Music
Post by: Ray Brookes on December 29, 2020, 01:14:03 PM
Always classy stuff from you, Farrell. This is a magnificent effort with fantastic production skills. Love the light and shade of the dynamics. Those guitars - jeez! Mixed and mastered to perfection. Great job; well done.
Title: Re: I Hear Music
Post by: TPB on December 29, 2020, 08:29:50 PM
Listened to this at work today and again just now on my phone have to say this the mix is so good it sounds great on the crappy phone speaker and outstanding on the studio speaker and this is a sign of a great mix well done to both of you this one is now on my playlist
Tim
Title: Re: I Hear Music
Post by: Pine on December 30, 2020, 11:50:13 AM
EXCELLENT!!! Cool intro and even cooler outro...but what's in between is killer. First off, i'm drawn to the darkness of it all...those metal guitar tones at the bottom are awesome...as are the guitar solos..but overall what really iced the cake was the great dynamics and wonderful mix and production. The lyrics fit like a glove Farrell and you sang it perfectly. Combining the two and you have a terrific tune here. 5 stars guys...time well spent!
Title: Re: I Hear Music
Post by: Mike_S on January 02, 2021, 03:32:35 PM
Super stuff Farrell. Those guitars are HUGE. Love the song... that chilled verse gives way to a massive sound. Top vocal performance here too. Brilliant work guys.

MIke
Title: Re: I Hear Music
Post by: Bluesberry on January 02, 2021, 04:20:01 PM
What can I say...awesome......f;ing awesome....holyshit kind of awesome...I have a feeling I am going ot listen to this bad boy a whole bunch...outrageous solo...its got the works
Title: Re: I Hear Music
Post by: Redler on January 03, 2021, 08:14:17 AM
So well written and arranged. The vocals by you is always a pleasure to hear! Brillian job!
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Post by: Groundy on January 03, 2021, 11:14:31 AM
What a great number Farrell, love it.... Alex
Title: Re: I Hear Music
Post by: StephenM on January 03, 2021, 05:48:50 PM
Quote from: Bluesberry on January 02, 2021, 04:20:01 PMWhat can I say...awesome......f;ing awesome....holyshit kind of awesome...I have a feeling I am going ot listen to this bad boy a whole bunch...outrageous solo...its got the works

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gotta agree with you man....this is friggin big time....
Title: Re: I Hear Music
Post by: StephenM on January 03, 2021, 05:51:13 PM
Farrell, We are not worthy!!!!!!   Feck man....that is just phenom man.  Your vocals defy your age.... that is total greatness...and the guitar and bass work are bril....the recording and mixing are superb..... and at around 3:25 where the vocals fade into that guitar that is on the edge of feedback really did it for me!  WOW!
Title: Re: I Hear Music
Post by: Bluesberry on January 03, 2021, 05:52:52 PM
Quote from: StephenM on January 03, 2021, 05:51:13 PMFarrell, We are not worthy!!!!!!   Feck man....that is just phenom man.  Your vocals defy your age.... that is total greatness...and the guitar and bass work are bril....the recording and mixing are superb..... and at around 3:25 where the vocals fade into that guitar that is on the edge of feedback really did it for me!  WOW!
I couldn't have said it better myself...what he said...