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Title: Know?
Post by: Gnasty on March 09, 2011, 03:29:20 PM
Well here`s a different one from me...From Metalhead to Mushyhead! ;D

Here`s the closest i`ve come to a love song. I wrote all the the music and some words last year. I finished it last week and decided to record it.

Know? 2011
All done by Gnasty
             Vocals: Gnasty...damn harmonies!! :D
             Stand alone recorder with broken button: MBR
              Guitars: Ovation acoustic and Ibanez FGM
               Percussion: Cheap maracas and stick club thingys from Cuba
                Production tactics done in Audicity

                             

                                          Know?

I need to know that you are with me when i am not around
I need to know that you will find me, when i don`t want to be found
I need to know our conversations with every single word
I need to know our situation
I`ve reached the climax, i need to know

You need to know that i am with you, every step of the way
You need to know that i will give you, more than words can ever say
You need to know that i`m impatient, but waiting patiently
You need to know your in the background, in the foreground i wanna see

We cast aside the lies, and all hard truths and many endless tries
We wish them all way, but they come back to haunt us day to day
What`s the point in living in the past, with too many good days to go
We`ve reached the climax we need to know

Need to know?
Title: Re: Know? - Gnasty
Post by: Tangled Wires on March 09, 2011, 03:38:51 PM
You old softy Eric ;)

Tasty acoustic finger picking, and those harmonics are sweet.

As for your vocal, all I can say is it is stunning, there is a lovely warm tone to your voice, and those harmonies came out superb.

I love the way you have kept it simple too, but when you can create an acoustic melody like this, and then produce a vocal to match, then its all you need sometimes.

The song has to be one of your finest, I am listening to it for the second time as I type this, and its just getting better all the time.

Title: Re: Know? - Gnasty
Post by: SE on March 09, 2011, 03:59:03 PM
Classy tune excellent acoustic guitar and vox, but it,s the sentiment that makes the tune, a really fitting birthday present I,m sure she,ll like it, excellent work!!
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Post by: pinktigerlilly on March 09, 2011, 05:05:49 PM
Eric, that is sooo beautiful!  It's the nicest thing anyone has ever done for my birthday...I will let you know now so you don't need to know anymore that you are so sweet and so good to me and I am truly so lucky to have met you and to have you in my life.  xoxoxo :-*
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Post by: Saijinn Maas on March 09, 2011, 05:19:35 PM
This was EXCELLENT!!! Nice acoustic work, melody flowed nicely with the progression, lyrics with the proper amount of mushiness! :)
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Post by: cuthbert on March 09, 2011, 05:35:42 PM
Woah...excellent song, Gnasty! First-class vocals and guitar - looks like you knocked this one outta the park, buddy!  And congrats!  :)
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Post by: OsCKilO on March 09, 2011, 05:48:13 PM
Oh man..........

What a seriously Impressive Song!!!!!!!!

Your Voice sounds Amazing!

And the arrangement just makes you want to hear it again and again!



It is Like the Foo Fighters had a baby with the Goo Goo Dolls!


It is one of those "That was a fast 3 mins..." songs....

PinkTigerLilly.... Treat that old softy good now!
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Post by: Oldrottenhead on March 09, 2011, 05:53:24 PM
fuck me gently with a bargepole  this required the words not the abreviation
did i say fuck me gently with a bargepole

braw tell yer maw
rock on baby
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Post by: Geir on March 09, 2011, 06:36:01 PM
FANBLOODYTASTIC !!!!

Stellar song Eric !!!!

WOW !!!
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Post by: Kenneth on March 09, 2011, 07:21:16 PM
Eric, serious talent here, very well done!
You sure do know how to play guitar, those chord changes are real sweet, reminds me a bit of acoustic Alex Lifeson.
As always the vox is the top, your quite a vocalist too. All with an mbr? hmmm... man, amazing!
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Post by: chip withrow on March 09, 2011, 08:08:37 PM
I was hooked from the opening guitar notes - beautiful and exotic. At about 2 minutes this takes a turn toward Guns and Roses territory - a powerful transition. Great song, best I've heard today.
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Post by: Tony W on March 09, 2011, 08:51:20 PM
This needs to go on the album with Shadows (https://songcrafters.org/forum/index.php?topic=4628.0).

Seriously Eric, this is nothing short of incredible. The guitar chops are fantastic, but that vocal delivery was amazing. I got shivers listening to this. Awesome.

By the way, I loved the production on this.
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Post by: Satchwood on March 09, 2011, 08:57:37 PM
This is a great song Gnasty!!  i'm tellin ya, great lyrics and vox, did i say ~ fantastic climatic build up at the end!
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Post by: launched on March 09, 2011, 09:03:20 PM
One word for you, bro....

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm blown away, what a fantastic song, songwriting and production. Love the vox, frickin' kick ass!!

Mark
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Post by: Redler on March 10, 2011, 12:11:43 AM
So beautiful and melodic, Eric. You've written brilliant love song...and birthday song, too!!

Kari
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Post by: Greeny (No longer active) on March 10, 2011, 04:44:34 AM
Incredible guitar work. The intricate playing and ringing harmonics had me from the start. And the vocal is wonderful too. This is such a beautifully-realised and wonderful song. A real pleasure to listen to. You're mining diamonds here. Can you tell I'm impressed?!
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Post by: henwrench on March 10, 2011, 05:54:21 AM
Top quality all round. Love the little backward flourishes. Great! Smooth vocals too!!

                                                               henwrench
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Post by: Kenny B on March 10, 2011, 08:31:01 AM
WOW!  This is simply beautiful.  Man ... this is a fantastic song!
Your guitars!, Your voice!, The production!  You've got some
serious talent and ability Dude!

Kenny B.
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Post by: Gritter on March 10, 2011, 09:21:58 AM
Incredible! A beautiful song so well played and performed. Everything about it is top class.
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Post by: Bluesberry on March 10, 2011, 10:13:40 AM
WOW man, holy crap this is good.  When you put your mind to it......WOW.  Great song.
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Post by: Gnasty on March 10, 2011, 09:01:59 PM

I`m overwhelmed by all your comments and i thank you all and if it wasn`t for you and the site to inspire me and make me to keep pushing myself to sing and write songs, i`d be sitting on my couch eating potato chips right now ;D
Quote from: Kenneth on March 09, 2011, 07:21:16 PMreminds me a bit of acoustic Alex Lifeson.


That comment made my day Ken..Thank you!!..Next to Randy, he is one of my favorite guitar players and the most under-rated. I`m a RUSH fanatic too!
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Post by: hardlock on March 10, 2011, 09:21:23 PM
WOW, in a word, OUTSTANDING!  Left me breathless!
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Post by: Rata-tat-tat on March 10, 2011, 10:39:33 PM
Duuuaaaddd!!!! That is a killer ballad you got goin on there man. I'm really diggin this. Loved the guitar work and production... Loved the bassakward effect you used... blended perfectly. By the way ur vox are kickin some serious ass here.

V/R
Tod
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Post by: Kevin Mammoth on March 11, 2011, 05:36:55 AM
Fantastic song - it is all great but the vocals are the standout for me, great performance and well recorded - which, as we all know, is not easy to do!  Killer song!
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Post by: boneonbone on March 11, 2011, 08:27:49 PM
It just blows me away when I listen to some of the songs and the talent resident on this board.............so much better than what you get on commercial radio........and this is ONE GREAT SONG!  Beautifully written, sung and played.  Great job!
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Post by: Ferryman_1957 on March 13, 2011, 12:26:39 PM
Wow Eric, this is absolutely stunning! Not mushy head, brilliant acoustic and world domination head - this would deserve to be a huge hit IMO. Fabulous guitar parts, I love that little trill you do in the LH channel guitar, and the whole thing just builds sublimely. This is really, really well put together and sounds absolutely fantasic. The lyrics are really good as well.

A very big "WOW" from me. Very well done.

Cheers,

Nigel

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Post by: tom r on March 13, 2011, 12:35:51 PM
Absolutely top quality song. The guitars sound just perfect. She must be jolly nice :-)

T
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Post by: Black Mary on March 13, 2011, 04:18:55 PM
Gnasty? That was soundin like the missing link between melodic sweet rock & grunge and what went before. Your melodies are world class. We're left in limbo tho at the end. Surely this is just the intro to a bludgeoner???
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Post by: tom r on March 14, 2011, 04:09:59 AM
BM i can see where your comin from... this could lead into a right belter :-)

T
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Post by: Gnasty on March 14, 2011, 05:36:04 PM
Quote from: Black Mary on March 13, 2011, 04:18:55 PMGnasty? That was soundin like the missing link between melodic sweet rock & grunge and what went before. Your melodies are world class. We're left in limbo tho at the end. Surely this is just the intro to a bludgeoner???


You sure kinda know me Black Mary...The music for this was written as a power ballad but not knowing how it was going to turn out when i recorded last week , i like the ending a lot and i`m happy as is. . The song is a question.

I could always write a part II for it though...Thanks again for the great comments!!!
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Post by: Bluesberry on March 15, 2011, 08:31:56 AM
Part II........whooooohoooooo go Gnasty go.....
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Post by: AndyR on May 01, 2011, 06:28:32 AM
I'm late to this...

But wow... WOW!

Lovely guitar (and yes, I can hear Mr Lifeson there as well), and superb vocals.
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Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on May 04, 2011, 05:01:13 AM
Wow, everythings been said, this is a great song. I'm rarely jealous of anything, but I actually wish I'd written this, I just love it..............Willie
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Post by: Hook on July 05, 2013, 04:30:41 PM
Where was I brother, this is stellar! I totally love this tune!
Rock On!
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Post by: andy casson on July 06, 2013, 12:45:37 AM
Holy smokes Eric FMGWABP! Wonderul song, musicianship, recording, mix, vocal - the harmonies are mind-blowing! And the outro tops it off nicely! Excellent bump

Andy
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Post by: Jarle on January 29, 2015, 10:12:39 AM
I had to listen to this before I listened to Geirs cover.

This is really fine songcrafting, well produced and performed. Fabulous vocal.
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Post by: Oldrottenhead on March 09, 2016, 10:25:50 AM
beautiful.
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Post by: SwanSong on March 09, 2016, 01:17:14 PM
I agree with all comment s and more
simply beautiful well done !!
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Post by: cuthbert on March 09, 2016, 01:31:53 PM
Great bump - we miss you around here, Eric.
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Post by: Rata-tat-tat on March 10, 2016, 08:35:38 PM
Great bump...glad I stumbled in here.... Hope your doing good Eric. Yes...you are missed!!!
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Post by: Redler on March 10, 2016, 09:28:16 PM
Quote from: Rata-tat-tat on March 10, 2016, 08:35:38 PMGreat bump...glad I stumbled in here.... Hope your doing good Eric. Yes...you are missed!!!

Agree with this.
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Post by: Ella on March 11, 2016, 01:55:24 PM
This is so miraculous beautiful song. Hope we can hear more your wonderful music here one day.
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Post by: Groundy on March 11, 2016, 10:56:27 PM
What a beautiful Piece Eric, Dont know how i missed this first time around.
Good Bump.......


Alex