The End

[Theclasswarrior]

Hi there!  My friend Elisa posted one of the other songs that we've recorded, for this album we are working on a while ago, called Winter Nights.

This is the next one we did, anyway.


http://www.supload.com/listen?s=d0WDbP


"I dropped by to say hello
Wearing my best attempt at self-respect,
wasn't real convincing.
To my disappointment,
You looked like a brand new girl,
Genuinely happy.

I've been trying not to think about
All your new adventures
I don't want any new friends.
And I'm not asking for an award,
But I've been setting record times
To the bottom of the bottle.
I guess I'd settle for some sleep.

I think the hardest part to swallow,
is how resolute you are
in your celebration
of ending the best thing I ever felt.
Is this the twilight zone?
Why am I still in love with you?
How do you make this look so easy?"

[Geir]

WOW ... what a way to introduce yourself !!! This is superb !!

I love the rhythm of the guitar and how the additional guitars come in with that melodic bridge.  FANTASTIC song !!!

I would have loved to have the vocal a bit more upfront tho'. Your voice sounds great, so there's nothing to hide !

On my third listen now as I download it for further listens!!

[Greeny]

Very nicely done. Great rhythmic playing and feel on the guitar, and I very much like the laid-back, understated vocal. This is very 'current' sounding stuff - it's right on the pulse of what's happening out there at the moment. Great work. This should do well if you pitch it at the right people.

[Saijinn Maas]

Wow! This is really good. I concur with Geir about the vox needing to be "just a bit" up in the mix. The voice so well with this that you should hear it!

Oh yeah... and it's too short!

[Ferryman_1957]

Superb acoustic playing, fantastic sounds and great arrangement. Nice lyrics as well, great work. The vox are a bit lost, they sound very good but are way too quiet for me.

Cheers,

Nigel

[OsCKilO]

Seriously Superb Song Here!!!!!!!!


Second listen now.

Very addictive tune!!!

Everything is fantastic!


That Great Vocal is a bit Quiet though. Would love it up in the mix.

[Oldrottenhead]

seriously great song and i love the arrangement, really powerful they way all the instruments come in after the line id settle for some sleep.
magic

[SE]

Great hear your first post enjoying this so much an really lovely tune.

[launched]

So clean and brilliant - I love it! The vox are great, you should bring them up more in the mix.

Mark

[Redler]

What a fantastic way to introduce yourself! I like the way you play your guitar; sounds so smooth and fine! Loved the melody and lyrics, too! Welcome to the site!

Kari