Aborted song, but kinda cool lead guitar part

[des0free]

Was attempting to write a song.  It didn't materialize, but I ended up noodling out probably my best attempted lead guitar part (I've got very little experience in that department).

Lyric I was playing with was "I'm from the heartland, that's where I'm from . . .".  After a chord change I had another lyric: "I got a woman to marry me, I say Hey!  I say Hey!"  It really didn't make much sense. . . Hence I picked up my telecaster and noodled this.

[des0free]

Oops, this should be in "originals"  . . .

[Tony W]

after the first few notes, you channeled a groove and I really like where that lead went. I smell a budding lead guitarist on the rise! I really started digging this, and could have listened to a full blown instrumental. At :29 seconds it really started to pop.

[Bluesberry]

I agree, real nice groove, the groove is the most impostant part to a solo I find, it is not always about the notes and what notes you play, but the groove, the feeling you have when playign the notes, the timing, thats what makes a solo great...and for all that this is a great solo.  I am with Tony, I could have listened to 3 minutes of this easy.

[Kenneth]

This has a great cheerful sound and I like your lyric ideas.
Songs quite often have rediculous lyrics, so my suggestion is to follow through with it anyways.
I think you're onto a good thing here.

[Wiley]

     I was just getting into this and it quit!!  You are definately on to something.  Please keep pursing this!!  Would like to hear a vocal versian!!
PJ

[hardlock]

I'm with Wiley - don't stop now.   

Make that an intro or something but do add some vox and finish the song.  Great groove!

[Gnasty]

great stuff Des!!...yeah you are on to something here for sure. Whether you sing on it or not just make it a bit longer. You have a good tone on that guitar.

[knniggits]

Cool guitar,it really gets into a stride. More please

[OsCKilO]

I’m not going comment until you finish this psychedelic slice of awesomeness!