Elevatory

[antisocialworker]

sounds like elevator music

[Donna D]

This is pretty. I wouldn't mind being in that elevator. 

Donna

[Geir]

Much too good for an elevator !!

I do think there's room for some vox tho .......

[Glenn Mitchell]

I think it very well done. An easy listen for sure but just fine as it is. It would also be a great backer.

[Rolow]

Your studio work is first class.  The song is crisp and catchy, but not simple.  It is, in fact, a clever arrangment of changes in sound and feel.  This is a good song as is.  If you're looking to get marketable about it, your might try for soundtrack (I don't know how to go about that), or add lyrics and a good vox ( I don't really know how to do that either.)

Good luck.  And thanks for posting.  I'm downloading 'cause this is just fun to listen to.

ps - not elevator musak in my book.

[Oldrottenhead]

added a vox/lyric https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=9252.msg124528#msg124528