You Didn't Even Say Goodbye - SAW 2010 - 42

Started by T.C. Elliott, October 17, 2010, 04:48:41 PM

T.C. Elliott

A day early. I spent more time on this than I intended.
10 Weeks to go and I'm counting them down. I'm pretty much ready for the challenge to be over at this point. Hopefully I'll be rejuvenated and can finish strong. Maybe...

You Didn't Even Say Goodbye
Song 42 in  the 2010 Song A Week Challenge
Written and performed by T.C. Elliott
One rhythm guitar track
One main vocal track
One track of one two lines doubled in the 'chorus'
One track of doubled verse vox
One track of chorus guitar fills
One track of 'leads' during breaks
Recorded via the BR-900CD
Mixed in Reaper

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In my eyes
You wouldn't look into my eyes
And you never said goodbye
Why won't you look into my eyes?

In my arms
I woke without you in my arms
Now I'm lost 'cause you are gone
I want to hold you in my arms

You would wake up with the dawn
When I woke up you were gone
You got up and let me lie
You didn't even say goodbye

And your smile
I got lost in your smile
I saw the future for a while
But now I'm missing your smile

Say goodbye
You didn't say goodbye
You never even told me why
Is this suppose to be goodbye?

You would wake up with the dawn
When I woke up you were gone
You got up and let me lie
You didn't even say goodbye
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Oldrottenhead

another belter magic piggy, nearly there only ten more, thats quite a feat.
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Donna D

Very nice, T.C.  :)  A good example of 'Less is more'.  ;)

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Quote from: T.C. Elliott (Pig) on October 17, 2010, 04:48:41 PMYou got up and let me lie
You didn't even say goodbye
Gotta say, you don't sound too unhappy about it, it's quite a jolly number.  I was thinking maybe you came in late (maybe gigging in a neighboring town) and she didn't want to wake you when she went off to work next morning.

I'm sure it's reminding me of a Buddy Holly song, can't think which one.

Nice recording though
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I like this a lot, T.C. - especially enjoyed the extra production touches.

I'm still in awe of your weekly original songs - so many and at such a high level of quality.
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It is amazing how you can keep this fine quality level -  week after week! This is just a classic! Very catchy melody!

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I read your lyrics first and tried to imagine what I'd have written, well, it would have been one a sad sounding song :( I clicked on the player and found a beautiful, light-hearted music, what a pleasant surprise! Great song, great guitar, great vocals Tom. And thank you so much for suggesting this site, it's a wonderful place with so many amazing songwriters. I'm enjoying it so much :)
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Gary F

Great song T.C.!!!It has a really good melody!!! I really like your vocals on this one!!!
I tried to comment on this song yesterday but my computer froze up,but at least this will bump this great tune back to page one !!!!!

Gary

AndyR

It's weird - like people have said, really sad lyrics, but it skips along... BUT! I didn't notice until I read the other comments - so I think it works anyway.

Good vocals - and I love the guitar sound! :)

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