Instrumental (Revised) now with added vox by orh do you wanna make love or fight

[indierik]

Okay so I made a few changes to my new instrumental, I broke up the intro solo and added half of it to the end of the song. I also made a few changes to the middle and the bridge.

Thanks for the feedback Side Effects and the rest of you. it was good constructive criticism. I think it sounds allot better thanks to you.

[Gritter]

Sounds great...it really sounds complete and works perfectly as an instrumental.

[Oldrottenhead]

rik ive started a lyric its drawn me in will i continue?

[Oldrottenhead]

lyric done and recorded , this little puupy wants to post.

can i? can i? can i? can i? hey can i ?

[Oldrottenhead]

my inner puppy got the better of me.

a song from the mirror yeah its about me refllecting on my contradictory ways but if you want it to be about other things thats cool too.

rik if you hate it i'll pull it toot sweet.

music written and performed by indierik
lyrics written and perfrormed by oldrottenhead

the words

You've got my attention
I was somewhere else
Lost in my own thoughts
Whilst you were lost in yours
The same world but different
From another slant
Intuitive savage
And idiot savant
Incensed by the censor
Or the slightest slight
Are we gonna make love
Or are we gonna fight

The thread has unravelled
And slipped from out of my hand
I don't know where it's going to
I don't know anything
The rules are for breaking
If the context is right
I talk out my asshole
From my high horse
I'm coming at you from the left
That don't mean that I'm right
Are we gonna make love
Or are we gonna fight

Are we gonna make love
Or are we gonna fight
Are we gonna make love
Or are we gonna fight

I don't trust anyone
That think they know it all
When they come from on high
To show us the true path
Spreading light and wisdom
And bearing gifts

You've got my attention
I was somewhere else
Lost in my own thoughts
Whilst you were lost in yours
The same world but different
From another slant
Intuitive savage
And idiot savant
Are we gonna make love
Or are we gonna fight
Etc

[Kenneth]

This is really good. Great job guys, rocks nicely, really like it.

[Gnasty]

Holy crap!!

Not an instrumental anymore but i do like that music Indierik. Great work!!

Jim...those lyrics and your singing is phenomenal!! Amazing song now.

[indierik]

lyric done and recorded , this little puupy wants to post.

can i? can i? can i? can i? hey can i ?

Quick reply: Holy Crap is right! This came out really well. You have a gift Jim. More later. 

[lg]

You've got my attention with this collab guys....

LG

[indierik]

Okay, now that I have more time...WOW Jim, I think we just made love. I need a cigarette.. haha...

You are such a skilled songwriter it amazes me, especially how quickly you come up with lyrics and a melody...and it not sound rushed. You have such a knack for finding the vocal melody, it always works perfectly. AND your lyrics are intriguing, clever and catchy. You should write professionally...seriously.

Anyways thanks for making my song shine.

Oh btw, I didn't realize the song goes out of sync at the end. My bad.