New One (untitled)

[indierik]

Here's a new one I've been working on. I wanted this one to start out loud and aggresive and then settle in to the Rhythm about 2 min in where the (future) lyrics should begin. But I'm wondering if the initial solo is too much (to long) and I'm not sure about the bridge.

feedback?

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[SE]

Really nice guitars,sound so good, maybe the intro is a bit long, I,d be looking for my cue about 25 secs in, the bridge section is on the money, love to hear some vox on this.

[indierik]

I agree side effects (name again?) I need to edit the intro solo a bit. I put allot of work into writing that solo, I'm kind of attached to it, so I'm thinking of breaking it up and placing part of it in the middle of the song or the end even, giving it a more triumphant ending. We'll see. Thanks for the feedback.   

[Gritter]

The solo sounds great. It is long but works as an instrumental. With lyrics, the intro should probably be shortened. Sonically, it is very pleasing to the ears. Tones are sweet and warm.

[lg]

I like it as is.....
But, perhaps cut the intro in half, add vox, and solo it out....

LG

[OsCKilO]

Those are happy guitatrs there bro!


Sweet stuff!

Love the solo'ing!