if i stay

[corryhully]

hi all
its good to be back in the computers with working soundcard world. posted a little acoustic dabble below, it seems in dire need of a vocal. abuse it all you wish.
all the best terry

[stoman]

Great playing! I love acoustic songs. This one is great without vocals, but I'd be interested in hearing it with vocals too.

Is that a mandolin?

Regards,
  Steffen

[j.g.]

Great song without vocals.

That does sound like a mandolin filling it out nicely.

Got some interesting parts and playing throughout.

Geoff

[64Guitars]

Very nice song, Terry. And welcome back! We haven't seen you around here for quite a while.

[cuthbert]

That's some sweet playing, corryhully.

And I cannot imagine oldrottenhead will let it go by for long without a vocal & lyrics... 

[ODH]

Hi Terry
I think it kind of does work without a vocal as well, although there's something missing.  Maybe just a tamborine.  Or a flute, I love flutes in any music.  The mandolin really lifts the piece to another dimension.

Cracking job.

Nick

[Oldrottenhead]

good to see you back terry, was down your way last month.

loving the mandolin, i might try give this a whirl but i am pub bound this very minute, so maybe later.
awrabest and good to see you back.

[SE]

Really nice acoustic sound and that mandolin really does lift if, enjoyed the listen, well played.

[corryhully]

thanks for the feedback. i look forward to hearing it change. i do love the total changes in direction other people bring to things. all the best
terry

[Speed Demon]

Here's a version with bass guitar added.