how U doin

holdempok · October 11, 2008, 10:28:46 AM

This one I wrote awhlie back 2004. Just got down on the BR. Still having a little trouble with mixing down the ending.

holdempok · October 14, 2008, 09:08:44 AM

NO REPLIES?

Mudhut · October 14, 2008, 10:34:46 AM

Hi holdempok, Nice song you got there, maybe have another go at the recording, defiantly worth working on, I like it

Greeny · October 14, 2008, 10:52:29 AM

Sorry - this post passed me by somehow.

This is a really nice song, and the vocals are great. From a purely practical point of view, you should try panning the guitar part(s) to give a wider spread to the sound. Also, what patch are you using for the guitar tone? It could be good to try different patches panned left and right with a bit of variation in strumming versus arpeggio to spice things up a bit. And what drum kit setting is this on? It might be worth playing with the different kit variations to see what sounds best. I love the way you've got the vocals though - just right as they are.

Just some constructive feedback - not that I know anything really!

Great song though!

Bluesberry · November 20, 2010, 08:56:55 AM

how U doin holdemandpokem, is this your first original song recorded? I seem to have missed it. Did you ever re-do it with all your recording experience you have now? By the way great song, you guys do this one live?