Loving Memory - Zoom R16

[ODH]

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9542433

Here's a song I already posted elsewhere, although this is an updated version.

It's about this bloke who's thinking about this girl he used to go out with.  There's a twist at the end.

Not all my songs are so bleak.

I hope you enjoy it

odh

[soundclick]9542433[/soundclick]

[Greeny]

I like a bit of shoegazing bleakness, lol. The twist was quite depressing, but hey-ho! This is great stuff... back to the early eighties, but a very tight and taut performance all-round. Great production, and lots of interesting changes. Excellent work, and and excellent way to announce yourself.

[launched]

This is awesome indie madness!! Right up my alley, I love it.

Welcome, and great songwriting!

Mark

[Redler]

This sounded a bit new wave / prog rock in my ear. Fine stuff anyway! You have put all these parts well together - well arranged and played. The bass sound is great! And welcome to the site!

Kari

[Nelson]

Cool intro
Very creative mix, added great energy to the musical arrangement.
Expressive lyrics and vocals

Well Done

Nelson

[Kenneth]

That's some impressive stuff there, quite a talent here. Nice job!

[Oldrottenhead]

i as sure i commented on this, maybe it was when i visited your soundclick  page.
braw tell yer maw

[Tangled Wires]

This is fantastic, love the way it keeps changing throughout, it is very cleverly constructed and has some great hooks.

Its almost like you are getting three or four songs for the price of one.

Great vocal, its suits the mood of music perfectly

[ODH]

Thanks for all your good comments everyone.

I'm pleased with this, although some of the levels are not right in places.  I think there may be another mixdown in the offing.  Is anything ever really finished?

odh

[chapperz66]

It may be bleak, but I like it.  Lots.

Paul