JUST ONE MORE TIME..(ORIGINAL ROCK COMPOSISTION) BY NEIL SWANSON CP 2010

[SwanSong]

Hot and steamy . still in chicago . at  11pm still at 85 degrees. this is the hottest
summer on record here. supposed to get thunbdershowers over ngiht and next
2 day.s hopefull y  this is summer s end. im sick of hot weather after 4 solid weeks
of plus 90. s i cant go out in that 2 much ., re respitory and air qualitiy . it s bad..
anyway enough complaining about the weather , ready for snow . lo. i wrote this
song tonight in about 2 hours. when i start im constantly changing chords. to see
where the beat and melody goes. so this is my final product for my attempt at a
orignal rock song. i called it just one more time. i guess. cause i was tired of doing
several takes on the song. and kept saying just one more take. lo. hope ulike it
have a great week rest of NEIL...................................................................!!

[scottieD]

Good job Swan...your true passion for music always comes through.  Well done.

[Ferryman_1957]

That's a nice composition Neil, I like the change at 1:16, that works really well. Glad you sweated this one through the heat. Great ending as well. For me, the lead keys could have been a bit higher in the mix but it still sounds great as it is.

Cheers,

Nigel

[SwanSong]

THANKS all i do have a passion for music. being homebound , i have
to keep my mind challenged. and active. besides creative tc NEIL

[Kenneth]

Neil , the song definitely has a summer vibe. It could use some vocals, did you consider it?

Sounds nice though!

Sept. 1 here, and every year you can tell when it hits because the temperature drops 10 degrees overnight!

[SwanSong]

hi ken
i considered vocals . but want to improve them at home before posting any
more songs with vocal.s practicing with k tracks at home.the door is open
for anyone wanting to write lyrics. and sing this original .here.
e mail id . is .

godshelper33@att.net

THANKS KEN NEIL.!