I Met You

[rich2k4]

quick song i wrote.  Extra Cheesy hahaha.  Like i said, i'm new to songwriting and am just trying to write as much as i can, good or bad.

[Redler]

Melodic and nice pop song, rich2k4! I like your playing and voice!

Kari

[Oldrottenhead]

if this is cheesy its a fine stilton or a ripe brie, lovely and tasty. new to songwriting? man you are a natural , duck to water is the phrase that comes to mind. keep em coming.

[lg]

Sounds great to me Rich.

LG

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

Good song, played and sung very well. It may be my imagination but do I detect a little Jim Croce influence in there. Keep 'em coming............. Willie

[scottieD]

Wow...simply a great song...wonderfully melodic....sounds what Jack Johnson would sound like if he wasn't an annoying #%@#@$Bag...lovely!

[AndyR]

Nice one.

Yep, keep writing

[Saijinn Maas]

I really like this! Sounds like your songwriting skills are well on their way. The only thing I would suggest is to push yourself vocally a bit more. Maybe I am off base here, but I think you sound self conscious of your voice and tend to sing a bit soft because of it. You got a good tone to your voice, just push it a little more. Can't wait to hear more  

[Geir]

if this is cheesy its a fine stilton or a ripe brie, lovely and tasty. new to songwriting? man you are a natural , duck to water is the phrase that comes to mind. keep em coming.

Ditto that !!

Great song and brilliant performance !!!

[OsCKilO]

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if this is cheesy its a fine stilton or a ripe brie, lovely and tasty. new to songwriting? man you are a natural , duck to water is the phrase that comes to mind. keep em coming.

Ditto that !!

Great song and brilliant performance !!!

Ditto!


AWESOME SONG.
Awesome performance!!!

Did you play and sing at the same time?

If So......

Maybe I am off base here, but I think you sound self conscious of your voice and tend to sing a bit soft because of it.

I Think it is the mic possition rather than your Voice.


Have it closer to your head than the Guitar if you want the vocal louder...

But I really Love the Feeling of this track and the Tone/Level of your voice!


Welcome!



Peace

T(OsCKilO)