Closing the book on you

[SwanSong]

AM in 100 percent agree ment with above comment.s your lyrics fit
the chord structure very well and the voals are sweet an smooth.
dont b afraid to post anyhting that is the onlly way one finds out
how good it is or bad. and with this song very charming and romantic
thumbs sup TC NEIL..................................................

[cuthbert]

Sounded good to these ears - your voice has a bit of old-school soul sound to it. More, please!

[Satchwood]

Sounded great to me too!!  So relaxing and laid back ~ great guitar playing and singing!

[rich2k4]

I am almost embarrassed to post this, because i am horrible at lyric writing, and the lyrics are such sappy garbage that it is just sad.

No need to worry! Imagine all the songs we would have never heard if they had to change all the lyrics to something deep and intellectual!

This has a John Mayer feel to it, if you you dont mind me saying. No, that's a good thing, it sounds real nice!

I think the thing is, sometimes when you create a song and then put it out there we are bareing a personal side of ourselves.
It's a very enjoyable listen, thanks for sharing!

that's funny because John Mayer is a huge influence on me.

[Geir]

Yes Yes !!!!

This is stunning !! Fantastic guitarwork !!! And a wonderful voice !!

So glad you posted this, it's going to the piePod for sure !

[launched]

Oh, yeah! You should be very happy with this one! We write lyrics to shed light, and the light is bright here.

Well done, with a great songwriting package backing it all up!

Mark

[Greeny]

Had to come back to this one. The guitar-work has really dragged me in. It's incredible.

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

Nearly missed this, glad I didn't, it's a really nice piece of musical construction. As for lyrics, well I normally have one line and then they will take me every which way. Yours are fine, no worries there. A fine piece of songcrafting............Willie

[Saijinn Maas]

Another good one! Great rhythm playing. Great timing and feel.

[Johnbee]

Just the title attracted me out of all the other titles by these prolific people.  I was going to work my way down the line, but the title drew me in.  Then I expected to hear a hard rocker or metal (again, based on the strength of the title) but I was surprised to hear this lovely acoustic mellow piece.  Very nice indeed.  The lyrics are fine.  Very nice, everything!

  JB