"The Ballad Of Fair Donica" - Here is another new one

[lg]

Here is a song that I took an old 17th century poem and put it to music.
It is about a Girl who dies, and her lover cries out for help, and magically she
seems to be better. Well, she got possessed by a demon and she 'lived' that
way for like 2 years without her lover knowing. But, as they attempt to get married,
....Well, just listen to the song..... You got the idea.

LG

[Krasi]

At one point, I'm not sure why, but this song reminded me of "Dead Can Dance"
They tend to tell stories like this in their hypnotic songs.

[SE]

Your on a roll Ig, another great tune, those vox really tell the story, only thing I would change is the drums, would try another drum kit and add a few fills to break it up, apart from that this is a winner.

[T.C. Elliott]

I like the melody and guitars. I agree that the drums could be made more interesting, and possibly mixed a bit lower. But I also think that this song would greatly benefit with an additional melody section. I'm not sure how/where to do it, but the same melody repeated along with the drums not changing up made it seem a bit repetitive.
I love the story and how you put it in song form. This is pretty ambitious. I like the hummed or dada vocals at the end. That's a nice touch.

[flyon90]

Great song this reminds of the Meat Puppets a bit.

[Oldrottenhead]

yer on a roll larry gaun yersel big yin.

[lg]

Thanks for the comments Guys!
I agree this still needs some work....
I'll re-visit it later when I get more time again....
Rock on!

LG

[launched]

Very cool song, Larry - Love the concept! I could picture this being done in a live environment with some lead here and there.

Sweet!

Mark

[guitarron]

Very cool song, Larry - Love the concept! I could picture this being done in a live environment with some lead here and there.

i agree

[OsCKilO]

Very cool song, Larry - Love the concept! I could picture this being done in a live environment with some lead here and there.

i agree

Ditto!

This would be great live!