a new song "let me confess"

[tom r]

this is a bit different for me. please excuse the lack of drum variety and the terrible attempt at a lead break i hope you get the general vibe though. Quality aint too good either.

I'm really selling this song :-)

Tom

[tom r]

by the way here are the words::::

when i think where i began
do i look like my old mam
n now i sit here all alone
a man of means that ive outgrown

im meaningless but you mean less
im in distress your just a mess
ive been careless you couldnt care less
i could use less im in a mess

a rocking chair thats motionless
im wracked with guilt but cant confess
im in a bind made by my own hand
round up the wagons my last stand

your meaningless and i mean less
your in distress im in a mess
you are carefree so stand by me
let me confess to all my mess

now im back where i began
lifes a race of which ive ran
i drink to you all in one go
the rain it falls the rivers flow

cheers chaps

tom

[launched]

Hey Tom!

This is brilliant songwriting - I love it! Very cool chords and sounds, and well written lyrics too. The lead sounds great to me - It has that sixties feel to it, like something Neil Young would have done.

Well done!

Mark

[tom r]

Cheers Mark
i'm a big Neil Young fan so that sounds mighty fine to me :-)

Tom

P.S. the lead really is poo!!!

[trev]

good stuff Tom I'll defo be listening to some more of your stuff later

[SwanSong]

HI there really nice peice . enjoyed it . great lyrics and thumbs up on this one.
take care NEIL

[FuzzFace]

This is hypnotic.
I'm an instant fan.

[Rata-tat-tat]

Tom Petty meets Neil Young... I think.... This is really great. Nice one Tom. Keep em commin.

V/R

Tod

[tom r]

Hey folks thanks for the comments. Tom Petty and Neil Young i can live with that :-)
Hi Trev really like your latest offering.

Tom

[Greeny]

I like this a lot. It's loose, fresh and VERY well performed. Some great melodic guitar work going on. The chord pattern reminds me a little of 'Tin Soldier' by Small Faces, but there's a whole different attitude and lo-fi beauty riding over the top of this one. A lovely piece of work. I'd like to hear more like this....