Cookie Jar --Facemask & AK

[Greeny]

Beautiful. This is so well done! The way you've recorded the guitar is perfect. I can definitely hear Neil Diamond in some of the lines and intonations. He'd be proud of this one, and so should you! It's f*cking magnificent. Love the lyric too.

[djbride]

Great lyrics.
I love the stripped down just vox and guitar really makes the lyrics stand out.
Vox are amazing.
Great piece of songwriting.


Dave

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

This seems to have been a bumper weekend for new material, everytime I check in there's a whole bunch of stuff I've missed or has just come on site, and this rates with the best of them.  Top notch.   Willie

[Gritter]

This rings with brilliance. Awesome recording.
I hear folk. I hear Neil Diamond and I hear
The Majesty of Rock!

[Facemask93]

This rings with brilliance. Awesome recording.
I hear folk. I hear Neil Diamond and I hear
The Majesty of Rock!

Thanks everyone who took the time to listen , and especially for the generous comments .

Rob & AK

[T.C. Elliott]

Yeah, you do a pretty good job with the story-song even though this isn't really a story-song. But it works.

[Redler]

... the lyrics were inspired by the picture of a soldier giving candy to local children...

That's awesome creativity!

This tune is genious both lyrics and music. Jethro Tull mentioned and I can imagine Ian Andersson singing this.  I loved the perfect sound of guitars, great snging and fine melody! Stunning job, guys!

Kari

[lg]

I noticed the Neil Diamond sound to your vox in some spots...
Then I read down some of the other comments and noticed the
Jethro Tull comparison, and I can definately picture Ian Anderson
performing this song.....
But, all of that aside, this is a fabulous song, and collab Guys!

LG

[Gary F]

 Great songwriting!!! It has a good message!!
Very well played!!! Great vocal delivery!!!
Very nice job guys!!!!

Gary

[Krasi]

Stunning!!!