Back In This Cold House:- With Video

[OsCKilO]

Had to do this one on the fly before an open mic night....

Sorry about the quality...



Came up with the song this morning ......


One take... GTR+MIC on two tracks, Played live....


Not much time to record music or look at the site recently........

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9295760
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zEEwCRNBwyk

Back In This Cold House

Words and Music by Tharek Mokbul

Lyrics

See you ain't strong for saying,
I was wrong for staying
Back in this cold house
I'm praying now....
Now the Flames are gone... (Repeat line...)

I hear this record play
and I can feel it fading
Back in this cold house
I'm Kneeling now
Fading All Along.... (Repeat Line....)

Your tears have dried and left a stain
Which shows your anger.
Back in this cold house
I see it now
I saw it all along... (Repeat line...)

We'll meet in memories for now.
In dreams outstanding.
Back in this cold house
I'm sleeping now...
I'll Lay until our dawn.... (Repeat line)



See you ain't strong for saying,  (And so on...)
 

[lg]

This is so mellow, but yet so sad!
I feel pain.....so cold!
You have imparted your intended feelings perfectly!
You have mastered the art of lyric.

Have fun at the open mic....Knock 'em dead!

LG

[Gnasty]

Holy Shmoley Bro!!

I lOVE IT!!

[Oldrottenhead]

magic t knock em dead tonight

[Gnasty]

Another listen.....The Guitar sounds incredible. I like how you built this song up to the climax that the lyrics stand for and bring it back down.

Lots of energy. It made me back tingle  

You are an inspirational songwriter to me Tharek!!

Fuckin right on!!

[Geir]

This is FANTASTIC !!!!!!!

I've said it before but I have to repeat myself .... THIS IS MY FAVOURITE song of yours !!

(shit I didn't get the first comment )

Tharek you are a true artist and ... I live you man !!

Your voice is just amazing .. you never stop to surprise and amaze me with your talent

And your guitar skills are (explicit deleted)

You are a true hero of this community for sure

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[Bluesberry]

utterly fantastic, so deep, soulful.  Your voice sounds really good a little higher like this, powerful, moving.  Really something, sounds so real so (explicit deleted).

[Nelson]

First, what an intro, love that picking pattern.
You always have great picking patterns.
Nice strong vocals and I love the change of pace for "We'll meet in memories..." verse.
You have a real artistic flare for lyrics. You wrote it this morning, Wow.
Have a great night at the Open Mic.

-Nelson

[Tony W]

I can't form a comment. This is a little too good for anything I can say.

[Gritter]

A masterpiece. Simple but so effective. Well played and sung.