"a letter to jun" - AYAN

[ayan0815]

this song is for my dad who died when i was just a little boy. i kept this song simple by using only 3 tracks. one rythm, one lead, one vocal. recorded using micro br.


a letter to jun

-AYAN

i wouldn't know
should i stay or go?
time don't care that my heart just doesn't know

if i can go back one more time
would it bring tears to eyes
and let you go
i should have known
that it wasn't so
too young to know

years gone by
everything seems clear
in my mind i felt that you are near

you never even said a word about..
that your going away for good
theres no goodbyes
just hello
i would never know
but i wanna know

[Saijinn Maas]

I like this a lot. Very heartfelt. I actually like your stuff quite a bit. A little bit Smashing Pumpkins, a lot a bit AYAN = Great Music!

[lg]

I Too like this alot!
Simple and heartfelt.
Great song writing my friend....

LG

[T.C. Elliott]

I wouldn't have noticed the smashin' pumpkins similarity  if not stated, but I hear it now. Not in a bad way at all. I think you've written a good song here. It's touching without trying to do too much.

[Geir]

yes yes !! this is a great song ! great melody, great lyrics and a wonderful performance !

love it

[Tony W]

Excellent song. I love the simplicity of the structure. It opens up for the vocals to deliver tons of emotion. Very well constructed, and performed.

[Satchwood]

Great genuine heart felt song~!!  I like it alot, well song and performed ~ great voice !

[Bluesberry]

Fabulous song.  I can't believe this is only 3 tracks, it really sounds full, great job on the recording.

[Oldrottenhead]

absolutely fabulous, i am at a loss for words as to describe how good this song is and how much the vocal "connected/communicated" to me. fmgwabp. braw.

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

What a great morning I'm having, so much great music and this is up there with the best. A simple emotional masterpiece.  Willie