This is my place

[Gu Djin]

Mind yer P's and Q's when you step into here.  Short song, so it won't take long.  Just time for a swift half before you slide out.

Excuse for some string bending.  Beware the quiet start.

[Redler]

Short but effective tune! I can imagine a smoky pub in some gangster film That guitar sounded very cool in the backround. Fine job!

Kari

[Tony W]

Sweet vibe to this one Leigh. Definitely a good listen. It's short, but I'll listen another 5 times to make up for it.

[launched]

Nice! Drifty and catchy at the same time!

Mark

[Pamala]

short can be good, but in this case I wanted it to go on. A bit o John Waite here...love the guitar sound.

[T.C. Elliott]

Yeah, it needs some guitaring right there at the end to make it taste great and be less less filling. Good stuff there but it needs more.

[Gary F]

Cool tune!!! Great voice!!!
Gary

[Johnbee]

Yer right!  Short 'n sweet.  Very effective communication. I do like a tune that gets to the point quickly.

  JB

[Black Mary]

This is so atmospheric !! You've tapped into something with your style. A film noir feel for sure but contemporary. It isn't too short. It's just right. Takes as long as it takes to tell the story & relate the message then out. Perfect !

[Gu Djin]

Thanks so much for the comments on my short song.  I did several "one minute songs" as part of a challenge.  Two were comedic, there was this one, which I don't know how to describe and and another was a simple love song, which I've tried and failed to work into a more standard length piece, several people said the "love song" was one of my better efforts?

I've left my replies a little late to mention all and each poster individually, but it's not a slight and I will try to keep up with what's going on in future.  This is a very swift moving board, which is good if can keep up, but bad if you have a life elsewhere

Black Mary - thanks for your listens to this and others of my songs - it doesn't matter what I try to achieve most of my songs have the same sound.  It would be nice to hear someone else do one and then that would show whether the similarity in the works is down to the performance or the writer.  Still, whatever it is I like doing what I do.

Leigh