ours by the longhair tigers work in progress

[Oldrottenhead]

damian and i have been working away at this one for a few days now, think its starting to come together but i think some additions are needed between the vocals all idea welcome

music performed and composed by damian lertora lyrics written and sung by oldrottenhead

[SE]

Sounds the biz to me, that track is just too good and your vox suit it to a tee, only an idea would be a really reverb guitar with delay with a recurring  riff in between the vox, but only in the far backround so as not to overpower the rest of this excellent tune.

[Kevin Mammoth]

Good tune with almost a "world" dance feel.  That keyboard figure at the end works well, you could maybe use that a bit more throughout the song

[Oldrottenhead]

damian has been reading the posts methinks just got this in my email

[Oldrottenhead]

theres been another few mixes but im drunk so cant tell

[Oldrottenhead]

this might be the one......................

[Greeny]

You're right - this IS the one. The 'Blue Monday' bassline gives it real depth and power. And the high-low vocals at the chorus add a perfect lift / contrast. This is a superbly put together track. Radio-friendly and radio-ready. Outstanding.

[Gu Djin]

Nice to hear a tune develop into the finished item.  Great sounds.  Love the vox.

Leigh

[Nelson]

I'm sorry Mr. Bowie. but these sets are reserved for the Longhair Tigers.
Did someone turn on my radio...  this song is radio ready.
Great job guys.

-Nelson

[Kevin Mammoth]

this song has been stuck in my head ever since I made my last post - I don't know how many times the lyric "stop a bullet with my heart" has recurred in my mind - you may have some created sort of anthem here!