I Cried One Moe Teardrop Music by Neil Swanson VoX And Lyrics by Geoff. cp 2010

Started by SwanSong, May 08, 2010, 09:12:12 AM

SwanSong

I Cried One More Teardrop(1)
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ANOTHER collaboration with Geoff doing Vox AND Lyrics
The mix is still being smoothed out am asking for a raw
track from Geoff on vox. this was done in only one track
and i have found doing seperate raw tracks work the best
then layering and mixing. so wanted to see how this is liked
and will re post new mix at a later  time tc NEIL .....................

HERE IS THE OFFICAL MIX SERVER PROBLEM WITH ORIGINAL
my thanks to GEOFF 4 the head s u p and corerction of problem )


It's more than just another day, and it still hurts my heart,

You are more than a memory, and your life was so hard.



When I close my eyes I see you, when I whisper your name I hear you

When I reach out with my heart, I can touch you once again.

Each day was a special day, each day felt so good,

With your life growing slowly, but growing so strong.



Now each day is a special day, your memory is so clear,

You're the light in my darkness, knowing you're still here.

I cry one more teardrop, with the thought of you gone,

But memories of our time together, help me carry on



...............................Mystery Voice.........................................



Not a day goes by, when I don't say your name    

But I know in my heart, one day we'll meet again

I cry one more tear drop, with the thought of you gone,

But memories of time together, helps me carry on

 (ps i did a remix and now i feel vocals r crisper and clerer)

Music by Neil Swanson  - Lyrics and Vox Geoff Judges  -  May 8 2010








Jim1970

I love the way this sounds Neil!!
I think it sounds great as it is.
Sounds like I am Floating in a Dream!!!
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A real beautiful and sooo melodic song again from you both! Nice vox and the keyboards sound, too.

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Beautiful music and excellent vox.
The lyrics are so heartfelt...
We all can relate to a loss.

LG
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SwanSong

HI all and thanks

HEY i finally figured out what i was doing wrong to reupload i did not go
to modify topic. there i found detach old song and the browse to reup load
the new version and mix. thanks for all your help  i think i have this w eb
site figured after 2 some months lo. and many thanks for the comments NEIL

SwanSong

HI GEOFF
This copy is far be tter and yes i think servers can effect over all digital files
love this and wil download from here and repost to other sites thanks for
the head s u p . tc NEIL

Ferryman_1957

Nice ballad guys, works very well. The mix sounds pretty good now, not anthing I would change here.

Cheers,

Nigel

T.C. Elliott

This one has a bit of a hymn quality to it. Which seems to fit considering the subject. Nice layering and a decent melody makes for a good listen.
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Sweet floating ballad, nice work!!  Laid back, melodic n dreamy string composition, and Geoff's voice fits the lyrics with emotion!
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